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over a year ago
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"It's a little bit out of the norm and was wondering how it would be perceived"
I would prefer a single male's profile to be wtitten by the single male. It smacks of dishonesty otherwise. |
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I'd be unlikely to respond, I want to know how you perceive yourself, not your partner. I'm not meeting her, it may sound harsh, but I don't really care what she thinks.
Yeah, I understand it's her fantasy, but I'm having no interaction with her. |
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By *yrdwomanWoman
over a year ago
Putting the 'cum' in Eboracum |
When I get a message from a 'woman' 'offering' me their mate, I tend to look askance.
As above, I prefer the guy to do his own searching, especially when he's supposed to be a single guy. |
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"It's a little bit out of the norm and was wondering how it would be perceived"
I perceive it to be a load of bull. Why can't the lady create her own single profile or the guy a single male profile or a couples profile? Seems like too much drama to bother with. That's my perception. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Interested in constructive comments regarding my profile please people"
Way too Long and still showing as a couple in title try reading your own profile and see if you understand it |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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yeah it is weird.
i get that guys in couples like to show they have permission to meet but because you can't actually tell who wrote it it could be fake permission written by you anyway, especially as you can't accomodate. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Revamped any better?"
Erm, I gave up when you said the profile was not because you are looking for additional sex but for your partner's fantasy.
Really? You're just going to take it for the team then? Not a nice approach. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Revamped any better?"
One thing - you're looking for a woman, not a female. A woman is the name for a human female. A female could be a plant, an elephant, or the inny bit on your iPhone headphones socket.
Female is considered by many to be quite an objectifying term when used to refer to women - so you might want to just make that little change. Or you might not, I don't know. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The profile is better. However the last paragraph still gives the impression the female write it. And I'm all honestly on a single man profile I do not expect to be speaking to a female in any way. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks for all the critique,I have tried to take on board most of what you have all said and I realise it will still not be everyone's cup of tea but please understand I don't use this profile constantly this was only set upto enhance mine and my partners fantasies and not for me to constantly play away if only one person replied and we hit it off and it became a regular thing that would great |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I didn't get to read the original, just this one.
Is it a couples profile or not? I'm confused? What's the fantasy supposed to be? I'd rather know from the profile description without having to message?
I feel like I'm missing crucial information. And I can never be bothered to ask, just move onto the next profile usually. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Reminds me almost of a job advertisement! Well written on many aspects out but not a profile I would reply to sorry."
Thank you everyone for the CONSTRUCTIVE feedback. Your correct I did ask I value opinions that are negative as well as positive. Is my new shortened profile better? |
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