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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hey everyone, been adding and stripping bits from our profile trying to get a feel for what we are like and our wants
can someone have a read through and give us some feedback? would be much appreciated  |
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I'd do a spell and grammar check, for example, you've used the word 'your' instead of 'you're'.
I'm not convinced saying 'no timewasters' will actually work. If a timewaster reads that, will they think "oh, shit! Rumbled!" Or do you think they will think "hee hee lets waste some time with them"?
Generally speaking, very interesting.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Looks good to me, love the photos by the way. Would anyone mind giving mind a look please have just rewritten it and added a new picture, any criticism on either of these would be much appreciated. |
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"Looks good to me, love the photos by the way. Would anyone mind giving mind a look please have just rewritten it and added a new picture, any criticism on either of these would be much appreciated."
It's good |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Looks good to me, love the photos by the way. Would anyone mind giving mind a look please have just rewritten it and added a new picture, any criticism on either of these would be much appreciated.
It's good "
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