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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Not long since been on here and ive just wrote a little about me, any advise/criticism welcome "
Grammar, spelling, lose the text speak, punctuation.
Start there. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Fair point but I dont wanna be blowing mi own trumpet if you get me lol just put what im after and what I like."
My not mi sorry, its not even like its text soeak word or a shortend quick way to write it its just changing a letter lol |
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If your profile reflects you perfectly then my interpretation of you is that you are much younger than you say you are and haven't quite reached the level of emotional maturity that would make you attractive to some.
The constant use of 'lol' shows you to be nervous of what you've written about yourself. |
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Profile says 'Happy go lucky' yet you feel the need to tell an ex where to go on your status.
Is that really necessary?
The profile says nothing about what you can offer others as it's mainly about what you're looking for/want.
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"Profile says 'Happy go lucky' yet you feel the need to tell an ex where to go on your status.
Is that really necessary?
The profile says nothing about what you can offer others as it's mainly about what you're looking for/want.
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I mentioned that earlier but didn't get a reply. Maybe you will. |
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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago
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"Fair point but I dont wanna be blowing mi own trumpet if you get me lol just put what im after and what I like."
To me that makes you sound a bit selfish. Didn't you realise it's all about us ladies?!!!!! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I understand you don't want to oversell but you have to sell yourself a bit pal, give people a reason to meet you. Just don't say anything which isn't true |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Haha fair play. the ex thing, yes I wrote that on my profile after a massive hurl of abuse from her and after a few drinks. I dont know what profile she has as shes made a fake one to spy on me |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Haha fair play. the ex thing, yes I wrote that on my profile after a massive hurl of abuse from her and after a few drinks. I dont know what profile she has as shes made a fake one to spy on me "
If you dont know what profile how did she hurl abuse at you? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Didn't seem too bad to me. Lose the bit about messages from guys... they won't read it anyway and it's negative.
Thanks and will do "
Way, way better mate! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"If your profile reflects you perfectly then my interpretation of you is that you are much younger than you say you are and haven't quite reached the level of emotional maturity that would make you attractive to some.
The constant use of 'lol' shows you to be nervous of what you've written about yourself."
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By *andS66Couple
over a year ago
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The only thing we would say, is your photos are all very similar to each other, and look kind of miserable and sullen in them. Doesn't tally with being a 'happy go lucky' type. So a pic with a smile wouldn't go amiss. |
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