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Seeking a super critical profile appraisal!!!
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Aya!!! I've just jazzed my profile righhhhhht up and I need people to point out the bad bits!
Any feedback welcome, even shitty feedback! All points considered.
Free asda smart price handbag to the best answerer. Smacked bum for the biggest pain in the arse!
Goooooooo! |
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"Ha, you always call me a pain, bends over, heres the arse lol
You've been well behaved recently... You get nothing for being well behaved. Xxx"
I wouldn't say those videos were well behaved, but i notice your profile doesn't mention you new insertion voyeurism fetish lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Aya!!! I've just jazzed my profile righhhhhht up and I need people to point out the bad bits!
Any feedback welcome, even shitty feedback! All points considered.
Free asda smart price handbag to the best answerer. Smacked bum for the biggest pain in the arse!
Goooooooo!"
It looks like you are after an exclusive relationship , with a woman who will keep you happy , won't answer back , will do as she's told and generally be all things to you .
Nice one   |
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By (user no longer on site)
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Brilliant profile if maybe a little long I got bored half way thru but only cos id already decided i wasnt intrested. did skip (hahaha) to the Sydney bit n thought it was funny.
I wouldn't call you atletic just average I'm afraid but that is only my opinion.
All in all a good profile xx |
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"Aya!!! I've just jazzed my profile righhhhhht up and I need people to point out the bad bits!
Any feedback welcome, even shitty feedback! All points considered.
Free asda smart price handbag to the best answerer. Smacked bum for the biggest pain in the arse!
Goooooooo!
It looks like you are after an exclusive relationship , with a woman who will keep you happy , won't answer back , will do as she's told and generally be all things to you .
Nice one "
I would partially agree to this, does sound like after an exclusive rekationship |
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By (user no longer on site)
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Good:
You have decent, clear profile text. You are clear in what you seek and reasonably so in what you offer. You can accommodate (so presumably you are ACTUALLY single!). The pics you have are clear.
Bad but not too bad)
Pics are a bit "samey"? Can you provide more variety? No face pic (but maybe you can send with messages?) |
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"Aya!!! I've just jazzed my profile righhhhhht up and I need people to point out the bad bits!
Any feedback welcome, even shitty feedback! All points considered.
Free asda smart price handbag to the best answerer. Smacked bum for the biggest pain in the arse!
Goooooooo!
It looks like you are after an exclusive relationship , with a woman who will keep you happy , won't answer back , will do as she's told and generally be all things to you .
Nice one "
Hahahaha! Thanks! I'll sort that! |
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"Brilliant profile if maybe a little long I got bored half way thru but only cos id already decided i wasnt intrested. did skip (hahaha) to the Sydney bit n thought it was funny.
I wouldn't call you atletic just average I'm afraid but that is only my opinion.
All in all a good profile xx"
Muchhhhhhhhas graciassssss |
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"Aya!!! I've just jazzed my profile righhhhhht up and I need people to point out the bad bits!
Any feedback welcome, even shitty feedback! All points considered.
Free asda smart price handbag to the best answerer. Smacked bum for the biggest pain in the arse!
Goooooooo!
It looks like you are after an exclusive relationship , with a woman who will keep you happy , won't answer back , will do as she's told and generally be all things to you .
Nice one
I would partially agree to this, does sound like after an exclusive rekationship"
I'll sort this. Haha! |
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"Good:
You have decent, clear profile text. You are clear in what you seek and reasonably so in what you offer. You can accommodate (so presumably you are ACTUALLY single!). The pics you have are clear.
Badbut not too bad)
Pics are a bit "samey"? Can you provide more variety? No face pic (but maybe you can send with messages?)"
Thanks! Good point! |
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"Aya!!! I've just jazzed my profile righhhhhht up and I need people to point out the bad bits!
Any feedback welcome, even shitty feedback! All points considered.
Free asda smart price handbag to the best answerer. Smacked bum for the biggest pain in the arse!
Goooooooo!
It looks like you are after an exclusive relationship , with a woman who will keep you happy , won't answer back , will do as she's told and generally be all things to you .
Nice one "
Ok, I've toned it down slightly! |
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"Aya!!! I've just jazzed my profile righhhhhht up and I need people to point out the bad bits!
Any feedback welcome, even shitty feedback! All points considered.
Free asda smart price handbag to the best answerer. Smacked bum for the biggest pain in the arse!
Goooooooo!
It looks like you are after an exclusive relationship , with a woman who will keep you happy , won't answer back , will do as she's told and generally be all things to you .
Nice one
Ok, I've toned it down slightly!"
Altogether, it is quite good though the repeated use of, "HaHa!" does jar with me and makes you appear somewhat immature. |
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Pics are very samey. Get rid of the similar ones and take some new ones like bum shot, open jeans shot etc. (Not that I just want to peeve, honest....)
There are a lot of hahas which grate a bit however it can be difficult for someone to notice a written joke without a hint so don't know what the answer is there....
It's a well written profile that clearly shows what you want and what you can offer. Like the fact it shows personality and a sense of humour |
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You're that age where i think "what's wrong with this person? Why are they on here? Are they damaged goods? Why aren't they just meeting and socialising like normal people? If they want a special friend they should probably stop looking for one on a swinging site". |
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By *yrdwomanWoman
over a year ago
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"You're that age where i think "what's wrong with this person? Why are they on here? Are they damaged goods? Why aren't they just meeting and socialising like normal people? If they want a special friend they should probably stop looking for one on a swinging site"."
I'm more likely to assume I'm not the person that guy is looking for, not that I am. |
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"Aya!!! I've just jazzed my profile righhhhhht up and I need people to point out the bad bits!
Any feedback welcome, even shitty feedback! All points considered.
Free asda smart price handbag to the best answerer. Smacked bum for the biggest pain in the arse!
Goooooooo!
It looks like you are after an exclusive relationship , with a woman who will keep you happy , won't answer back , will do as she's told and generally be all things to you .
Nice one
Ok, I've toned it down slightly!
Altogether, it is quite good though the repeated use of, "HaHa!" does jar with me and makes you appear somewhat immature."
I am somewhat immature. Xxx |
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"You're that age where i think "what's wrong with this person? Why are they on here? Are they damaged goods? Why aren't they just meeting and socialising like normal people? If they want a special friend they should probably stop looking for one on a swinging site"."
I'm damaged goods and proud enough to accept it. Xxx |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Aya!!! I've just jazzed my profile righhhhhht up and I need people to point out the bad bits!
Any feedback welcome, even shitty feedback! All points considered.
Free asda smart price handbag to the best answerer. Smacked bum for the biggest pain in the arse!
Goooooooo!
It looks like you are after an exclusive relationship , with a woman who will keep you happy , won't answer back , will do as she's told and generally be all things to you .
Nice one
Ok, I've toned it down slightly!
Altogether, it is quite good though the repeated use of, "HaHa!" does jar with me and makes you appear somewhat immature.
I am somewhat immature. Xxx"
Then leave it in if it reflects your personality. |
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You have "eye trouble"
I this, I that, and I the other!
Who cares a fig what YOU want?
Think about what you have to offer the person you are hoping to meet.
Oh, by the way..........
No face pic = no meet!
Simple! |
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"You have "eye trouble"
I this, I that, and I the other!
Who cares a fig what YOU want?
Think about what you have to offer the person you are hoping to meet.
Oh, by the way..........
No face pic = no meet!
Simple! "
That's interesting! Thanks, I'll have a think.
I've had plenty of meets without having a public face pic though.
Thanks! |
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