Almost all the sentences start with "I" - it might be less 'you' orientated if you considered what you can offer ladies. What's in it for them? Of course it's all about you but there are ways of saying it. Finding a less obvious way to say so might make it a more friendlier read. |
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By *ampleme OP Man
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"Almost all the sentences start with "I" - it might be less 'you' orientated if you considered what you can offer ladies. What's in it for them? Of course it's all about you but there are ways of saying it. Finding a less obvious way to say so might make it a more friendlier read. "
"I" will address your point now.
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So really your profile is going to be the work of randoms on the forum. It should be about you- what you want, what you can bring to a meet. Not about what others think is a good idea to put on a profile. There is plenty of genetic advice about profiles if you do a forum search.
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"I'm amending after each post so keep me updated
So really your profile is going to be the work of randoms on the forum. It should be about you- what you want, what you can bring to a meet. Not about what others think is a good idea to put on a profile. There is plenty of genetic advice about profiles if you do a forum search.
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Thanks I appreciate your point..it's wasn't so much the con tent more the context and wording.x |
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