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By *ivnwcplCouple
over a year ago
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"Hi there I no my profile isn't the best and prob not the worst but I was just wondering if people could check it out and give me a bit off advice "
Get a new keyboard, it's sticking on some letters  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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As others have said sort out the spellings, vary your pics a bit. Shouting in your first line about 'sorting shit' is going to put lots of people off. And saying your kinks puts lots off makes you sound a bit weird. Maybe take it out and when you get chatting ask them if they have any kinks and go from there. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi there I no my profile isn't the best and prob not the worst but I was just wondering if people could check it out and give me a bit off advice "
A seriously badly written profile. My apologies if you are dyslexic.
"Try before you bye," for instance, is very different from, "Try before you buy" (though neither may be appropriate). |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi there I no my profile isn't the best and prob not the worst but I was just wondering if people could check it out and give me a bit off advice
A seriously badly written profile. My apologies if you are dyslexic.
"Try before you bye," for instance, is very different from, "Try before you buy" (though neither may be appropriate)."
Could be a play on words though?  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi there I no my profile isn't the best and prob not the worst but I was just wondering if people could check it out and give me a bit off advice
A seriously badly written profile. My apologies if you are dyslexic.
"Try before you bye," for instance, is very different from, "Try before you buy" (though neither may be appropriate).
Could be a play on words though? "
It could indeed but looking at the rest of the profile, I fear it is just bad spelling. |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
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Get rid of the first line!
And yes, I am yet another member of the Grammar Police, and I'm afraid the number of mistakes in your profile is very off-putting! Spend some time and effort putting things right  |
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I agree..the first line is awful, but you don't seem inclined to take up or even acknowledge the good and consistent advice on offer, in spite of having been online a fair bit in the time that others have posted, so this looks like yet another thread seeking attention rather than advice.. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The consensus of opinion so far is you are illiterate and the pics are of different people now won't that just put you off asking again ,patience is the key |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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To all that have replied about my spelling yes I am dyslexic and if you want me to write a essay before we meet then that's fine I do appreciate the advice and I will take note as for people saying photo isn't mine ive been verified so please stop the abuse if i wanted abuse as I'm not abusing you but thank you for advices |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"To all that have replied about my spelling yes I am dyslexic and if you want me to write a essay before we meet then that's fine I do appreciate the advice and I will take note as for people saying photo isn't mine ive been verified so please stop the abuse if i wanted abuse as I'm not abusing you but thank you for advices "
Don't worry mate. They'll see past the spelling once you sort out the googly eyes on your penis |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"To all that have replied about my spelling yes I am dyslexic and if you want me to write a essay before we meet then that's fine I do appreciate the advice and I will take note as for people saying photo isn't mine ive been verified so please stop the abuse if i wanted abuse as I'm not abusing you but thank you for advices "
Things are improving; bearly a glitch in this post.  |
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Seriously... lose that line and whilst I don't want to be the grammar police, you asked for help so I suggest you proof read it and fix the typos.
Hope that helps 
