Looks good to me! Lovely pictures too
However, If I were being hyper critical -
there's a spelling typo, a line that doesn't make sense (the one ending with 'good taste') and no need to mention that you've daughters (kids is fine)
- but I'm not
Lots of luck, Tee X |
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One area that could be improved is your pictures. The first one isn't clear, I would ditch it. Variety is good something that shows a bit of your personality. |
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