It seems ok but you have a lot of wasted words in there. Just updating your profile and where to start is information that is pointless as is the lol in your title.
I think you come cross as friendly and polite and wish you luck. |
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"Hi all not new on here but recently updated my profile txt and was wondering if you would be able to offer some advice to make it better "
Grammar, spelling, pictures and more informative text required. |
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Thanks you all for the helpful input  I have updated abit more now . Is there such a thing as being to polite ? Also for the spelling/punctuation mistakes I can't always help as have mild dislexiya.
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"Thanks you all for the helpful input I have updated abit more now . Is there such a thing as being to polite ? Also for the spelling/punctuation mistakes I can't always help as have mild dislexiya.
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You don't have access to a grammar or spell checker? |
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"You don't have access to a grammar or spell checker?
No as mainly on here via my phone but auto corrects most of my spelling "
It might be worth you gaining access. Plenty of resources available and if you are dyslexic it might help you in other textual communication situations. We all have what others perceive to be weaknesses and the best thing is to learn ways to address those? |
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"I feel like i am applying for a job or going for my higher english rather than trying to act out my sexual fantasies the way people go on in this site sometimes tbf btw lolz #justsaying  "
The fact of the site is that men outnumber the women and the way men get sex is to advertise themselves via a profile with good wording and photos and follow up with good messages and then follow up again with good conversation and then follow up again with good sex. |
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"Hi all not new on here but recently updated my profile txt and was wondering if you would be able to offer some advice to make it better "
Ditch the ps part, it's pitiful.
Ps. I'm dyslexic too. |
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"You don't have access to a grammar or spell checker?
No as mainly on here via my phone but auto corrects most of my spelling "
Firefox on your phone can have a spellchecker and grammar plug in. I keep meaning to put one on mine |
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"Is there such a thing as being to polite ?
Not in my opinion there isn't "
My ex used to get infuriated by my constant apologising. It was hilarious when she went
"ffs just stop saying sorry"
"Sorry"
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"Is there such a thing as being to polite ?
Not in my opinion there isn't
My ex used to get infuriated by my constant apologising. It was hilarious when she went
"ffs just stop saying sorry"
"Sorry"
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Being polite doesn't just mean saying 'sorry' |
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"Hi all not new on here but recently updated my profile txt and was wondering if you would be able to offer some advice to make it better
Ditch the ps part, it's pitiful.
Ps. I'm dyslexic too."
I thought that bit was quite funny  |
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"Hi all not new on here but recently updated my profile txt and was wondering if you would be able to offer some advice to make it better "
All good mate, the best of luck. |
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