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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi fellow swingers,
Looking for a quick critique of my profile. Either it's very poor, or I'm extremely ugly as I have a poor conversion rate lol.
I've tried to inject some humour into my profile, and I tend to tailor my messages I send out. Any advice welcome  |
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"OK...translation, it needs work lol"
I've seen a lot worse.
I would lose the reference to messages from guys ..all you need is to filter your messages.
Also the meaningless legal notice clutters it up. |
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I thought your profile was decent! If I were being critical, there are a couple too many cock shots, but otherwise your pics are good and the text is alright....
The legal stuff is pointless so take that out and maybe say a bit more about what you're interested in?
Good luck - seems to me that you're doing the right things Mrs C&E |
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I'd take out the bit about you being 'addictive'
And I'd just leave it as 'to deliver' instead of 'to deliver ....... orgasms.
Just my opinion.
Might help you to get meets if you get yourself out to clubs.
That way people can see you face to face, chat etc rather then just judging you from your profile, pics, verification & messages alone.
One thing I've learned from the site is that you need to actually meet someone before you can accurately decide if you want to swing with them or not  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi fellow swingers,
Looking for a quick critique of my profile. Either it's very poor, or I'm extremely ugly as I have a poor conversion rate lol.
I've tried to inject some humour into my profile, and I tend to tailor my messages I send out. Any advice welcome "
What is all that legal bullshit people keep putting on their profiles??? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi fellow swingers,
Looking for a quick critique of my profile. Either it's very poor, or I'm extremely ugly as I have a poor conversion rate lol.
I've tried to inject some humour into my profile, and I tend to tailor my messages I send out. Any advice welcome "
For us the profile has very little to do with it. It's more to do with the contact e-mail. That's our best indicator of whether people may interest us. But do lose the quasi legal twaddle. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi fellow swingers,
Looking for a quick critique of my profile. Either it's very poor, or I'm extremely ugly as I have a poor conversion rate lol.
I've tried to inject some humour into my profile, and I tend to tailor my messages I send out. Any advice welcome "
if I'm honest not much content and a little arrogant many women don't like that ,you need to get rid of spelling mistakes here should be hear and put more content about you as a person and what you like and are looking for good luck  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks for the advice everyone. I'll fine tune it. Hoping to get to some clubs next week, kesteals or ab fabs seem like good starts. Happy swinging, and if you see me, come and say 'hi' |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Cheers for the further input.
I'll flesh it out further. Want to be a little left field, any suggestions?
Move to Edinburgh "
Lol or maybe you should move to London? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"If you're telling Ladies you're single (of which we have no idea) it may be an idea to exclude the pics with GF/Wife's clothes in background  "
Incorrect, living with my Mum and currently house hunting but fair observation. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I've completely rewritten this now. New improved, and generally sucking a lot less than before."
It's a good profile......didn't see the old one though lol.  |
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By *ohjaneCouple
over a year ago
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"Thanks for the advice everyone. I'll fine tune it. Hoping to get to some clubs next week, kesteals or ab fabs seem like good starts. Happy swinging, and if you see me, come and say 'hi' "
-And it is sooo nice to see a face picture with a lovely smile on !
Well done.
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