You have had meets so must have got something right.
Sorry, but to be honest there is nothing in your profile that would attract me at all...
The text says nothing about you, what you are looking for or offering, and the lack of punctuation doesn't help.
The fact that 2 of the 3 photos are of your cock, is another negative for me.
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Good start, but it doesn't tell me an awful lot -
1. You were new once
2. You may have some experience
3. You will meet locally
4. You would consider traveling greater distances to clubs
5. You can be very talkative.
6. Safe sex only.
Those were the things I recalled, after _iewing.
Keep negatives to a minimum. Don't over-emphasise stuff that can be said clearly and simply-, eg the areas you'll cover and the safe sex message.
Keep the comment about your experience level pertinent.
Overall, other than knowing you're chatty, I feel I don't really know an awful lot about you, whether you've done any mmf play etc, been to any clubs etc. And importantly, what marks you out as significantly different to the next single guy. |
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Also, there were some spelling errors or typos - these aren't killers for a profile, but may as well be avoided. Many people are not the best spellers or expert with grammar use. If the writing gets noticed due an error, then it's accentuated the wrong things from your profile. Get someone else to check it over for errors, if you're not so confident in this area.
Allow others to feel comfortable or enthused after they've seen your profile. Let them have had a feel for you, have a good grasp on how you look, know your physique, and be able to determine if they may fancy you. |
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"Hi how can I inprove my profile is there anything good about about it now go easy lol xx"
Bland uninformative text. Bad pictures. Bad spelling and grammar. |
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