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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's way too long , didn't even get to read it all to be honest .
Pics are all too similar .
On the plus side you do make it clear what you are looking for and what you are offering . |
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It is a bit long, but then I can hardly use that against you with the length of mine.
However, the safe sex sanctimonious bit at the beginning put me off. Yeah, it's not for you, but don't judge others on their choices. |
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By *ounglad OP Man
over a year ago
Burnham |
Thanks everyone for the tips. I cut down each of the paragraphs so hopefully it will look a little less daunting. I'm gonna keep the safe sex notification though because it is something important to me. Also added some pics though not sure if they're all that great |
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By *abioMan
over a year ago
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"Thanks everyone for the tips. I cut down each of the paragraphs so hopefully it will look a little less daunting. I'm gonna keep the safe sex notification though because it is something important to me. Also added some pics though not sure if they're all that great"
keep the notification if you want.... what i will say is this...
"you get one chance to make a great first impression"....
if the first few lines of the profile is harsh written (in bold) and negative... what incentive are you given for people to read on further......... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Having just scanned your profile...
There is no need for upper case to be used.
You say you are more picky yet your age range is 18-99
You come across as arrogant
And as mentioned it is far too long...
If I were in any way bi I would skip your profile straight away!
On a positive note
I wish you well in your search
Good luck |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Opening with a shouty caps rant will put most people off reading past that, it did me. People don't need or want to be lectured, we all make our own decisions and have our own preferences. Try to put your across in a more friendly way, that way you'll become more approachable and be less off putting. Good luck. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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For what it's worth, use your profile to grab their attention, nobody cares you're so passionate about safe sex.
Write a paragraph or two to turn their head.
Make them want to know who this stud muffin is, what makes him different to everyone else.
You will get more attention this way.
And when you get that first meet, turn up with five johnnies all on top of one another and proudly tell them that you practice safe sex.
If all else fails, borrow a sky remote and take a picture f your willy against that. The ladies love it. A can of Lynx is just as good, if you don't have sky. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It is fine. Just remove the bit in capital letters. It sounds preachy. Just add a discreet sentence about safe sex. You are, of course, young which will limit your options but there are some cougars out there. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"It is a bit long, but then I can hardly use that against you with the length of mine.
However, the safe sex sanctimonious bit at the beginning put me off. Yeah, it's not for you, but don't judge others on their choices."
Safe sex advice from a 19 year old??
Thanks for the advice, we are sure no-one on here knew any of that. |
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