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over a year ago
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Lose the parts about race, imo anyway, and the bit about "big ones"
All seems a bit robotic, start it all again and explain what you're about as a person, rather than what you're looking for maybe.
I usually don't take anyone seriously who wears a flat peak baseball cap btw  |
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By *ce king OP Man
over a year ago
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"Lose the parts about race, imo anyway, and the bit about "big ones"
All seems a bit robotic, start it all again and explain what you're about as a person, rather than what you're looking for maybe.
I usually don't take anyone seriously who wears a flat peak baseball cap btw "
thanks mate,ill do it right now lol |
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over a year ago
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"BBC looking for entertainment"
"Hi everyone im yan,tall (5ft10)young French black man,Here to
light up the game and see who is up to join me"
Would sound better as:
"Voulez vous coucher avec moi"
...is what this tall, dark handsome Frenchman could be whispering n your ear tonight  |
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By *ce king OP Man
over a year ago
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""BBC looking for entertainment"
"Hi everyone im yan,tall (5ft10)young French black man,Here to
light up the game and see who is up to join me"
Would sound better as:
"Voulez vous coucher avec moi"
...is what this tall, dark handsome Frenchman could be whispering n your ear tonight "
that is sick actually hahaha why eceryone always saying that statement |
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over a year ago
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I would put
"Voulez vous coucher avec moi..."
as your title
...is what this tall, dark handsome Frenchman could be whispering n your ear tonight
as your opening line.
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By *ce king OP Man
over a year ago
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"I would put
"Voulez vous coucher avec moi..."
as your title
...is what this tall, dark handsome Frenchman could be whispering n your ear tonight
as your opening line.
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thanks for the help,how does it look now  |
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"...is what this tall, dark handsome Frenchman could be whispering n your ear tonight
move that to the start of your profile, not as a status update
done  "
No, it isn't done at all.
You have missed the word Frenchman, so your first line makes zero sense. |
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By *ce king OP Man
over a year ago
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"...is what this tall, dark handsome Frenchman could be whispering n your ear tonight
move that to the start of your profile, not as a status update
done
No, it isn't done at all.
You have missed the word Frenchman, so your first line makes zero sense."
snap!! my bad ive added it,how about the rest |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Some (us included) wouldn't meet you without knowing what your cock looks like. You can't please everyone i guess that will be a private picture then"
Could be, or put up half a dozen assorted pics in your public gallery with just one of your proud member. Even the cockophobes shoudn't be too offended by that |
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By *ce king OP Man
over a year ago
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and great of all IT IS WORKING thanks alot guys.thinking that i was trying to reduce someone profile's text to half last week because it was nearly 2 pages and today you guys helped me.
moral of the story:
"you do good to someone and it comes back to you in a different way"
keep doing good out there people,it will come back to you when you least expect it and thanks again for the help   |
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