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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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I want to know why people all ways says that my profile doesn't make sense.. Please say what do you thinks is not right or what do you think I need to change. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's quite bitty and doesn't flow! It's like you keep adding bits on.
Try to rephrase it all into paragraphs.
Talk about yourself.
Talk about your likes / dislikes
Talk about what your looking for
Have a structure so it reads easier!  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I think as well, with English being your third language...it's reflected a little but in your writing...
I think it's understandable but it would benefit from a bit of a re write...do you know anyone who could give you a hand?
Greek is my second language and I'd need some help writing something like a fab profile so you've done pretty well so far to be honest.
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