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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Guys and Gals, I posted a couple of weeks ago regarding my intro profile to the site. I had what I think is some good advise from some experienced swingers. I've rid of the plentiful cock shot and tweeked the wording.
I'm not prepared to do facial pics tor everyone to see as I'd rather remain discreet due to work commitments.
(YES I AM 100% FULLY SINGLE)
I want to appeal to both single females and couples, with first impressions counting for so much your thoughts and suggestions that you may offer will be very much appreciated.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"You think a lot of your colleagues are on here then?"
Actually a few people I know are yes, I identified them through their face pictures on their profile... Hence why I don't have mine up.  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"You think a lot of your colleagues are on here then?"
It's not only that, it's hard to explain, but I'm in a position within an organisation where it could become detrimental to my role should wrong people see. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How are you going to stop me nicking one of your photos?get rid of the disclaimer at the end it is pointless, and meaningless..
Done! "
No, it is still there. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"How are you going to stop me nicking one of your photos?get rid of the disclaimer at the end it is pointless, and meaningless..
Done!
No, it is still there."
DD!!!!! Double Done!!! |
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"How are you going to stop me nicking one of your photos?get rid of the disclaimer at the end it is pointless, and meaningless..
Done!
No, it is still there.
DD!!!!! Double Done!!!"
Well done 
Ps. Don't dress as a sheep  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I'm new to the scene, but confident, flirty and adventurous. I love meeting new people and good company, and am more than happy to meet socially to see if we click in person before any further naughtiness is arranged.
I would love to meet a couple and help them fulfill any fantasies they might have. I am an easy going guy in the bedroom and comfortable with FMM play, but completely straight, so the wrong guy for you if you're looking for someone a little more bi playful.
I consider myself fit and in shape, clean and trimmed, and reliable, and am ideally looking to meet others the same.
I am Gym Fit, Tanned, Tattooed, Bearded, Friendly, Confident, Creative, Flexible, Energetic, Fun, Reliable...and have a lot to offer both in and out of the bedroom!
I'm hoping to find fun times and friendship, sexy experiences, and a few laughs along the way 
I cant sleep so thought id have a bash at rewriting your profile to make it a lot more appealing to couples...so the above is my version
Im sure you can spot the differences and maybe use that to help. The above would appeal to me a lot more anyway...but its all subjective.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I'm new to the scene, but confident, flirty and adventurous. I love meeting new people and good company, and am more than happy to meet socially to see if we click in person before any further naughtiness is arranged.
I would love to meet a couple and help them fulfill any fantasies they might have. I am an easy going guy in the bedroom and comfortable with FMM play, but completely straight, so the wrong guy for you if you're looking for someone a little more bi playful.
I consider myself fit and in shape, clean and trimmed, and reliable, and am ideally looking to meet others the same.
I am Gym Fit, Tanned, Tattooed, Bearded, Friendly, Confident, Creative, Flexible, Energetic, Fun, Reliable...and have a lot to offer both in and out of the bedroom!
I'm hoping to find fun times and friendship, sexy experiences, and a few laughs along the way
I cant sleep so thought id have a bash at rewriting your profile to make it a lot more appealing to couples...so the above is my version
Im sure you can spot the differences and maybe use that to help. The above would appeal to me a lot more anyway...but its all subjective.
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WOW, I don't know what to say, thank you. You are far better at putting the words together than I am, this won't be forgotten.
Subjective or speculative from what you've seen of me already? 
Now to put it into action....thanks again! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Of course you'd need to include something about single women too and what you're looking for there...but glad that might help. It didnt cure my insomnia unfortunately but hey ho!
Personally I'm not a fan of cock pictures...there are tonnes and tonnes on here...they start blurring into one after a while lol...it'll be the arty/unique/different pics that'll get you noticed...be imaginitive! |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"C here, D's asleep...god knows why I'm still awake! "
Have you not slept at all? At least I have the excuse of being at work you poor thing. Are you working today, I pray one of you are for D's sake...I've a feeling your going to be a little bit grumpy today. Plenty of sugar and caffeine on the menu!
I will work the profile out when I wake, I'm far too tired to even contemplate starting it. Besides, the way you have pieced that together, it will surely appeal to a coupled or single woman.
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
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Profile is now much better, thanks to your little bit of help
You should do well as your body pics are good.
Your choice of course, but I'm not a fan of cock pics, and the one with a close up view down your japs eye just make me shudder a little (and not in a good way!) - sometimes less is more and there are some things we don't have to see in such detail  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Profile is now much better, thanks to your little bit of help
You should do well as your body pics are good.
Your choice of course, but I'm not a fan of cock pics, and the one with a close up view down your japs eye just make me shudder a little (and not in a good way!) - sometimes less is more and there are some things we don't have to see in such detail "
Every little helps and is greatly appreciated. Will trial with a fully clean profile and take down the cock shots. |
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The trouble with giving anyone a virtual re-write of their own profile is that is no longer becomes their own profile. The one outlined above is bland, generic and similar to hundreds of others. It lacks any hint of the OPs personality because it isn't his! So, although you, OP, think it's better than your own and the other guy was trying to help you, he has, in fact, done you a disfavour. You would have been better advised to type in 'profile advice' in the forum search and write your own. After all, if you can't write an interesting profile yourself, how will you possibly get through a conversation by message when a woman says 'tell me about yourself?'. |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
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"Profile is now much better, thanks to your little bit of help
You should do well as your body pics are good.
Your choice of course, but I'm not a fan of cock pics, and the one with a close up view down your japs eye just make me shudder a little (and not in a good way!) - sometimes less is more and there are some things we don't have to see in such detail
Every little helps and is greatly appreciated. Will trial with a fully clean profile and take down the cock shots. "
Sooooo much better in my opinion. ...good luck |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"The trouble with giving anyone a virtual re-write of their own profile is that is no longer becomes their own profile. The one outlined above is bland, generic and similar to hundreds of others. It lacks any hint of the OPs personality because it isn't his! So, although you, OP, think it's better than your own and the other guy was trying to help you, he has, in fact, done you a disfavour. You would have been better advised to type in 'profile advice' in the forum search and write your own. After all, if you can't write an interesting profile yourself, how will you possibly get through a conversation by message when a woman says 'tell me about yourself?'. "
I'm guessing you never read my original profile. If you had, you'd know that it has literally had minor tweeks that i had asked for help for in said forum.
It was valuable help that made my profile more fab user friendly just by changing giggly the way I had originally worded things.
Unless you plan to chat me up, I wouldn't let it trouble you.
...please don't chat me up, "I'm not bi playful"! |
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By *abioMan
over a year ago
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"The trouble with giving anyone a virtual re-write of their own profile is that is no longer becomes their own profile. The one outlined above is bland, generic and similar to hundreds of others. It lacks any hint of the OPs personality because it isn't his! So, although you, OP, think it's better than your own and the other guy was trying to help you, he has, in fact, done you a disfavour. You would have been better advised to type in 'profile advice' in the forum search and write your own. After all, if you can't write an interesting profile yourself, how will you possibly get through a conversation by message when a woman says 'tell me about yourself?'. "
actually..... i fully agree with this....
that profile effect isn't you.... its someone else interpretation of what they think people want to hear......
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How are you going to stop me nicking one of your photos?get rid of the disclaimer at the end it is pointless, and meaningless..
Done!
No, it is still there.
DD!!!!! Double Done!!!
Well done
Ps. Don't dress as a sheep "
What about googly eyes? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How are you going to stop me nicking one of your photos?get rid of the disclaimer at the end it is pointless, and meaningless..
Done!
No, it is still there.
DD!!!!! Double Done!!!
Well done
Ps. Don't dress as a sheep
What about googly eyes?"
I just knew that there would be a googly eyes reply before long.
Thank goodness for googly eye replies. They are, erm, googly. |
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