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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi all
Could i please ask for feedback on my profile, not having much luck, seems ok to me, i think, in terms of time on here i'm a relative newbie, need some advice off more experienced swingers..
All help very much appreciated
Thanks |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi all
Could i please ask for feedback on my profile, not having much luck, seems ok to me, i think, in terms of time on here i'm a relative newbie, need some advice off more experienced swingers..
All help very much appreciated
Thanks"
It is alright but possibly needs a little bit of humour injected into the text and a little more personality. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It describes you, plus point.
That's all it does, minus point. No mention of what you're looking for from the site, no mention of what you have to offer a potential playmate. There's nothing there that says 'why should I choose this guy over the 1000's of others' |
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