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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi I was wondering if anyone could have a look at my profile and give me your thoughts and opinions on how to improve it or make it more appealing
Many thanks
Harley |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Terrible profile. A cock picture. No decent description of yourself or what you can offer. We would not take a second look. Search the fora for profile advice. It really is quite straightforward. |
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By *abioMan
over a year ago
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"Your status update says you've re-written it, how bad was it before because in all brutal honesty, it's still quite poor."
this....
it all "I.....I......I...." and nothing about the people you may want to meet....... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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That's a rewrite? I'd suggest looking around at the successful guy's profiles and see what a profile actually is.
P.S. Not mine though, I'm a lazy Twat!! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Must have been dire before, because it's still pretty poor.
Many have mentioned that the legal warning is meaningless (there is even a faq about this. Fab advise that while meaningless it also wastes valuable space on servers) but it remains on your profile.
Many have commented about your choice of profile picture - though it appears you have ignored this advice.
As others have mentioned, there are many, many guys who have asked for profile advice. Search the forum and see what advice has been given to them.
Oh, and by the way, it is rewritten, not re wrote.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thank you for all your replies, wasn't quite expecting to be took apart, however I feel all points are valid and constructive criticism is a good thing, I shall have another attempt, |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Thank you for all your replies, wasn't quite expecting to be took apart, however I feel all points are valid and constructive criticism is a good thing, I shall have another attempt,"
Lawd. You really did not take any advice on board, did you? One dick picture and generic text? People did try to help you. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Thank you for all your replies, wasn't quite expecting to be took apart, however I feel all points are valid and constructive criticism is a good thing, I shall have another attempt,
Lawd. You really did not take any advice on board, did you? One dick picture and generic text? People did try to help you."
I haven't rewritten it yet been busy, was unaware of the unmentioned deadline |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Yes it's dire...you lie too about your age...why do that and not expect it to be spotted.cock shot is awful and unnecessary....you're proud of your cock but it doesn't impress the ladies.think about what you truly have to offer |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi I was wondering if anyone could have a look at my profile and give me your thoughts and opinions on how to improve it or make it more appealing
Many thanks
Harley "
Get rid of cock pic.... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Thank you for all your replies, wasn't quite expecting to be took apart, however I feel all points are valid and constructive criticism is a good thing, I shall have another attempt,
Lawd. You really did not take any advice on board, did you? One dick picture and generic text? People did try to help you.
I haven't rewritten it yet been busy, was unaware of the unmentioned deadline"
No deadline. Like so many similar posters on here, you asked for advice, received plenty of it and did not act on it. That is your choice. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Wow fabbers.. You tore this dude apart, and with reason too, this profile sets alarm bells for me ringing.. The public picture username has been taken from another profile, the usernames don't match, and to erase the background to a dick pic makes me think your hiding this from a loved one and haven't stated you are, you may not be, I'm just saying that's my first impression of your profile, I personally think single males have the toughest job getting meets due to massive numbers, you need to look at other single male profiles for ideas, also state what you're interested in and what you hope to achieve, hope things get better x |
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Like so many that put up these What's-wrong-with-me threads I don't think the OP was expecting as much of the justifiable criticism that he has had...
Leaving two different ages and the cock shot indicates clearly enough that he is not on here to take sound advice as putting both of those right would have taken far less time than any of his reply postings.
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