Hi Fabsters!
We've been back for 3 weeks and now we're back in the groove it was time to improve our profile text.
Do you get a feel for who we are and what we're about when you read it and look at our pictures?
Does it come across as inviting?
Any suggestions or feedback gratefully received |
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Very inviting
Just missing that all important verification
Although I would take out the experienced swingers from before bit x
Fab pics btw, again I'd take out the pro photographer bit some people equate that to chancers xx |
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Fab pics btw, again I'd take out the pro photographer bit some people equate that to chancers xx"
Good advice, actually a keen amateur (with pro equipment) but taken it out and now just mentions we love taking pics |
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Although I would take out the experienced swingers from before bit x
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We wasn't sure wether to put this or not, as we've both very much played before, but equally we're engaged now so was trying to get this across. Maybe a case of too much information? |
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Although I would take out the experienced swingers from before bit x
We wasn't sure wether to put this or not, as we've both very much played before, but equally we're engaged now so was trying to get this across. Maybe a case of too much information? "
Yes that's the feeling
Mind you we are ones to talk our profile is so bloody long lol x |
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"Great profile and love the pics!!!
Wish we had couple pics but C prefers to be behind the camera lol! "
Thanks for the compliments! We've made a few adjustments now based upon the comments here... aww is Mr C a bit camera shy? xx |
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