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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You've used the word 'an' instead of 'and' several times, and there's no punctuation. Being brutally honest, since that's what you've asked for, your English isn't great, it's too short and not very imaginative.
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By *iewMan
over a year ago
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I can imagine females who are actively seeking guys will take a look at it, they will know what you are offering and will see that something 'special' and message you instead of the 100/1000's others... |
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