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Ladies - Please could you check over my new profile text? :)

By *ohnjones3210 OP Man over a year ago

Chester

Hello! I'm back again with a fresh profile text.

Please could you ladies have a look through it for me? Do you think its OK? I think it may be a bit too 'raw' in places. What do you think? Any feedback appreciated positive or negative.

Thanks xx

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

My skewed sense of logic always makes me think men could ask men what they think of their profile, so rather than ask 100's of potential 'customers', ask those who have the 'shops' that are doing well. Or am I completely not getting something here?

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By *yrdwomanWoman over a year ago

Putting the 'cum' in Eboracum

I was just going to say that you're better off getting advice from the more successful men on here, but Steve beat me to it.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I really like the profile actually. If you messaged me I'd definetely answer to find out more, especially as you're the best looking man in the country

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By *tloversCouple over a year ago

Warrington

Great profile..I would reply if I was single lady

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By *issy louWoman over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

Excellent profile...I would definitely reply to a message from you

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Looks good to me. Now get to a social or a club and it'll be complete.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Well you have met loads op, so your doing better than most lol.

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By *organ and rob zombieCouple over a year ago

bradford

Well the efforts there, it's nice to see people that do make the effort and try to make positive changes

Well done

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By *ohnjones3210 OP Man over a year ago

Chester

Thanks everyone. To the first guy, nope, that doesn't work! I've been successful in the past but it really is women that we need to chat to and get feedback from... Majority of men don't have a bloody clue!

Anyway, ladies, is there anything which I can improve on?

Xxx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

lol

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Thanks everyone. To the first guy, nope, that doesn't work! I've been successful in the past but it really is women that we need to chat to and get feedback from... Majority of men don't have a bloody clue!

Anyway, ladies, is there anything which I can improve on?

Xxx"

So a guy that has over 60 meets doesn't have a clue??! I'd say he was doing something right so why not seek advice from successful guys as well as women?

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By *amissCouple over a year ago

chelmsford

"Hello! I'm back again with a fresh profile text.

Please could you ladies have a look through it for me? Do you think its OK? I think it may be a bit too 'raw' in places. What do you think? Any feedback appreciated positive or negative.

Thanks xx"

Well written profile and nice pics!

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By *bony in IvoryCouple over a year ago

Black&White Utopia

Yeap it good!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I think its a very nice profile and I now feel that you will have lots of women looking at your profile by asking women what they think of it......well done!

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By *rtemisiaWoman over a year ago

Norwich

"Hello! I'm back again with a fresh profile text.

Please could you ladies have a look through it for me? Do you think its OK? I think it may be a bit too 'raw' in places. What do you think? Any feedback appreciated positive or negative.

Thanks xx"

It's fine. I like what you about masculinity.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

We both took a gander and are agreed it's the best Single bloke's profile we've seen to date

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Anyway, ladies, is there anything which I can improve on?

Xxx

So a guy that has over 60 meets doesn't have a clue??! I'd say he was doing something right so why not seek advice from successful guys as well as women?"

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