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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I'll have a good look through it Monday afternoon for you, but a couple of things to think about for now.
You've only been here for a few weeks. It takes most of us single guys around 6 months to get our first meet. There are just so many of us, compared to the number of couples and females. For every woman there are around 100 guys and women, on average, get around 100 messages a day. Doesn't leave a lot of time for them to come looking for you. You need to be pro-active in seeking them out.
Secondly, if I were you, lose the status about getting a veri. It sends out the wrong vibe. It makes people think that you're more intrested in getting verified than you might be in then.
I'll come back to you later on, but for now I need to try and get some sleep.  |
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Your profile is fine...what i wonder is whether it is really something that You have written. I am not convinced the fluency in writing you show in your profile text matches the broken and hard to read writing of your recent post.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Just had a read through it and I'd echo many of the sentiments above.
Nothing really wrong with your profile, except for a few spelling, grammar and punctuation errors.
For example
'I'm hear like all of us....'
Now, a spell checker isn't going to pick up the error you've made, so perhaps the easiest thing for me to do is correct the mistake for you, which is highlighted with the use of capitals
'I'm HERE like all of us...'
The word I think you were looking for in your middle paragraph is 'spontaneousness' 
Try and avoid 'text speak' - use the word 'you' instead of 'u'
Remember, you've begun your profile by stating that you're well educated, so little details like this can make a difference.
All in all though, a pretty decent first attempt. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"It always puts me off when a guy says he's "well educated" then can't spell or form correct sentences."
I agree, a proof reading would be a good idea, everyone makes the odd spelling or grammatical mistake but your profile is littered with them, which for me as a casual observer totally detracts from the central message you are trying to give.
All the best though OP, I hope you have many fruitful meets on here |
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"It always puts me off when a guy says he's "well educated" then can't spell or form correct sentences."
Totally agree. Although it goes for anyone on here. It's quite concerning the number of people who are of an age where they should know the basics yet their profiles are poorly written. Not expecting the site to be full of Mensa members but it is off putting. Text speak comes across as juvenile, or to me it does anyway. |
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"Your profile is fine...what i wonder is whether it is really something that You have written. I am not convinced the fluency in writing you show in your profile text matches the broken and hard to read writing of your recent post. "
Well I would hardly commend the profile for being fluent. It is disjointed and very difficult to follow, lurching from one obscure half-made point to another, generally rambling and confused.
This is supposed to be your showcase, so it really needs a lot of corrective work |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You need to do a spell check and grammar check via word, as the profile is very hard to read.
Shy but dom? That does not go together, on here a week and thinks meets come that easy, no as others have said some guys have been on here a year and still no meet.
Also your post about girl friend has not done you any justice, as you know she is a call girl, but went bareback. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"You need to do a spell check and grammar check via word, as the profile is very hard to read.
Shy but dom? That does not go together, on here a week and thinks meets come that easy, no as others have said some guys have been on here a year and still no meet.
Also your post about girl friend has not done you any justice, as you know she is a call girl, but went bareback."
I need to use the green arrow more! Who sleeps with a hooker without a condom? Now we know! |
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"Your profile is fine...what i wonder is whether it is really something that You have written. I am not convinced the fluency in writing you show in your profile text matches the broken and hard to read writing of your recent post.
Well I would hardly commend the profile for being fluent. It is disjointed and very difficult to follow, lurching from one obscure half-made point to another, generally rambling and confused.
This is supposed to be your showcase, so it really needs a lot of corrective work"
by fluency i meant that although there is no or little punctuation, the language, words and expressions used do not match thone in the original post... |
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Dont take the profile too seriously, no one does.
If you want meets then get yourself to a club ... use this site to socialise, not many guys get meets through this site alone and the ones that are verified are mostly done so through a club meet |
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"Your profile is fine...what i wonder is whether it is really something that You have written. I am not convinced the fluency in writing you show in your profile text matches the broken and hard to read writing of your recent post. "
Ok I admit English isn't my best subject
And as to u think they are both written by me what makes u think that?
Am also I took the time to make sure my profile was better my post I just threw together as I was going to bed
Thanks again all changes will be made soon  |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Dont take the profile too seriously, no one does.
But I do.
Does nobody else?
I don't take my profile seriously. I just have it for fun lol  "
With all due respect, this possibly why you have no meet verifications after having been here a year.
If you're happy with that state of things, then fine, but I think the point that comes across is that if you don't take your profile seriuosly, nobody is going to take you seriuosly |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Dont take the profile too seriously, no one does.
But I do.
Does nobody else?
I don't take my profile seriously. I just have it for fun lol
With all due respect, this possibly why you have no meet verifications after having been here a year.
If you're happy with that state of things, then fine, but I think the point that comes across is that if you don't take your profile seriuosly, nobody is going to take you seriuosly"
Yes I am happy at least I don't complain why I don't get veris as I don't actively searching, instead using the forum for fun. |
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"Your profile is fine...what i wonder is whether it is really something that You have written. I am not convinced the fluency in writing you show in your profile text matches the broken and hard to read writing of your recent post.
Ok I admit English isn't my best subject
And as to u think they are both written by me what makes u think that?
Am also I took the time to make sure my profile was better my post I just threw together as I was going to bed
Thanks again all changes will be made soon "
The postings and the profile are about the same quality as far as I can see... |
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