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By *irkd1968 OP Man
over a year ago
camberley area |
Looking for advise on my profile, been on here just over 6 mths. Had a social and intimate meet with what I believe are ok veris ! Chatting away to people but struggling to get meets or even offer of meets. I'm a genuine guy, believe I'm reasonable ok, keep well presented. I'm courteous and polite but maybe that's the problem ! Any advise appreciated   |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hi Dirk.
Well, you can't be doing that bad as you've had a couple of meets, but, as I have done with a number of newbies, let's take a look at your profile and see if we can give it a polish.
I like your title. Not too sure on the use of 'ineffable' - I mean, it's in the right context, but will many people know what it means? - then again given the limited space, I think it works fine, so we'll leave it 'as is'
I don't see anything inherently wrong with your profile text aside from some minor grammatical and punctuation errors.
But I think you could say more.
Your profile text at present only speaks of what you are looking for.
It says nothing about who you are as a person, with the exception perhaps of the word 'genuine'.
Women want to know these things.
You're also not giving away a great deal of what it is you have to offer.
Not really comfortable with the sentence 'Safe sex would be a pleasure following long foreplay obviously'
The Safe sex part is, of course, fine, but it's the rest of it that bothers me somewhat.
You might want to think about what you regard as foreplay. Get her juices flowing, so to speak. No need to be graphic, but engage her brain.
And the word 'Obviously' makes me cringe. Why is it obvious that you'll engage in long foreplay?
Not all men are so thoughtful.
The rest of it is ok, but read through it and then read through it again.
How does it come across?
Does it make sense?
I have to say, I feel that you've got the right approach, so we're starting with a good solid foundation here.
I notice that you can't accommodate.
Now that's not a problem, but you really should consider explaining why on your profile. It may seem insignificant to you, but a lot of women are going to be wondering if you've got a wife at home that you're cheating on.
Remember, we're dealing with women's minds here 
Now to your pictures.
Oh dear!
Lose some of the cock shots, and upload some other pictures.
If you can, include a face picture, but if you're not comfortable doing this (due to job etc) have one in Private pics and explain why it's not on show.
Hope my comments are of assistance.
Good luck my friend, and enjoy your time here.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Afternoon PS well thanks now that was perfect appreciate your feed back and will action suggested changes soon
Appreciated D "
You are entirely welcome my friend |
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