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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi
I would appreciate some feedback about my singles profile the Mrs says I've wrote way too much and it's too long winded, think she's just a tad jealous tbh haha.
All feedback good and bad will be most welcome.
Username to search is - h0t_chocolate
Thanks for reading.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"think she's just a tad jealous tbh haha."
No way! Heh. If you're worried about the length of your text IMO you could safely ditch the first two paragraphs. They are a long list of adjectives and other descriptors (yes, tedious to read) that actually don't add that much insight to who/how you are. |
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By *adybee77Woman
over a year ago
MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire) |
"think she's just a tad jealous tbh haha.
No way! Heh. If you're worried about the length of your text IMO you could safely ditch the first two paragraphs. They are a long list of adjectives and other descriptors (yes, tedious to read) that actually don't add that much insight to who/how you are."
I'd agree with that. They make you sound a bit full of yourself.
To me, it seems to be missing something - it reads with about as much interest as my shopping list... I prefer to see a little humour in there rather than a list of I am, I like, I do... |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks, nope not going to change it yet until am happy I've had enough feedback to make a decision (if at all).
Are my pictures ok or should I put some more nude ones on?
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"To me, it seems to be missing something - it reads with about as much interest as my shopping list..."
I'd read your shopping list any day  Preferably hand-written. |
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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago
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"Thanks, nope not going to change it yet until am happy I've had enough feedback to make a decision (if at all).
Are my pictures ok or should I put some more nude ones on?
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It depends on who you will be contacting on your single profile, if it is single females, then I would keep any nude ones in private, as we don't really want our eyes poked out when opening a new message  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Mostly be contacting single women maybe couples who are looking for MFM or FFM, mostly be used for when the Mrs has the painters in and am not getting any  |
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