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Your profile has to be 'you' not what others say it should be | |||
"Calling all you nice Ladies can you give me any tips on how to improve my profile? Any info most welcome, thanks. "You're a man! Shouldn't you be asking men!  | |||
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Face pics are available on request.
If you like recieving oral, massages, cuddles and kisses then you're in the right place.
Please don't hesitate to ask me any more questions, I won't bite.
[name/nickname/initial]
PLEASE NOTE- Any person or institute does NOT have my permission to use or copy my profile or photos, doing so would violate my privacy and would lead to legal proceedings. Thanks for reading.
Just a few ideas, don't copy and paste it :P I'm no professional profile writer, so just have a think about it. | |||
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"Not much point in asking men when I am looking for women as I would like to know what contents in a profile appeal to women "Look at the user above you, how many veri's?? He is obviously doing something right so why not ask the successful men on here, makes perfect sense. | |||
"Not much point in asking men when I am looking for women as I would like to know what contents in a profile appeal to women "If you get 20 replies from a woman all suggesting different things and you incorporate them all into your profile............... The profile is no longer yours, it's what others think it should be. It becomes a generic hash together and your own personality gets lost. | |||
"I hope you're happy, I just pinched my leg in my laptop trying to help xD Firstly: (VERIFIED GENUINE) We know, we can see the green tick. We know how tall you are from the stats bit on your profile. Speaking for myself, I don't care how much you weigh, or what your waist size is. We can see your body type in your pictures. Its a big block of writing, so its hard to read. Try bullet points or smaller sentences. Rather than saying you are disease free, say you get tested regularly and sexual health is important to you. It's less blunt but we get the idea. Personally, "I am 100% honest and genuine..." annoys me in a profile, its unnecessary. The bit where it says "I prefer ladies to be dress size 10-14 tallish but not essential" sounds a bit strange. Do you mean its not essential for them to be tall? Or not essential for them to be a size 10-14?? Most women want to see face pictures when they start talking (I didn't look at your pics long enough to see whether you had any face pics). The bit about private pictures would personally make me feel as though you had something to hide. If you only hide face pics, I'd suggest saying something like "I have face pics on request" Hello there, thanks for taking the time to read my profile. I am a white English man with a great sense of humour. I pride myself on being well mannered, well spoken, clean shaven and smelling nice! Sexual health is important for me, so I get checked regularly. I'm looking for lovely ladies who enjoy dinner, drinks, laughs and great sex! I am able to meet in the afternoons, and evenings.
Face pics are available on request.
If you like recieving oral, massages, cuddles and kisses then you're in the right place.
Please don't hesitate to ask me any more questions, I won't bite.
[name/nickname/initial]
PLEASE NOTE- Any person or institute does NOT have my permission to use or copy my profile or photos, doing so would violate my privacy and would lead to legal proceedings. Thanks for reading.
Just a few ideas, don't copy and paste it :P I'm no professional profile writer, so just have a think about it."Wow that's some help you've given him  I hope he acts on it. | |||
"I hope you're happy, I just pinched my leg in my laptop trying to help xD Firstly: (VERIFIED GENUINE) We know, we can see the green tick. We know how tall you are from the stats bit on your profile. Speaking for myself, I don't care how much you weigh, or what your waist size is. We can see your body type in your pictures. Its a big block of writing, so its hard to read. Try bullet points or smaller sentences. Rather than saying you are disease free, say you get tested regularly and sexual health is important to you. It's less blunt but we get the idea. Personally, "I am 100% honest and genuine..." annoys me in a profile, its unnecessary. The bit where it says "I prefer ladies to be dress size 10-14 tallish but not essential" sounds a bit strange. Do you mean its not essential for them to be tall? Or not essential for them to be a size 10-14?? Most women want to see face pictures when they start talking (I didn't look at your pics long enough to see whether you had any face pics). The bit about private pictures would personally make me feel as though you had something to hide. If you only hide face pics, I'd suggest saying something like "I have face pics on request" Hello there, thanks for taking the time to read my profile. I am a white English man with a great sense of humour. I pride myself on being well mannered, well spoken, clean shaven and smelling nice! Sexual health is important for me, so I get checked regularly. I'm looking for lovely ladies who enjoy dinner, drinks, laughs and great sex! I am able to meet in the afternoons, and evenings.
Face pics are available on request.
If you like recieving oral, massages, cuddles and kisses then you're in the right place.
Please don't hesitate to ask me any more questions, I won't bite.
[name/nickname/initial]
PLEASE NOTE- Any person or institute does NOT have my permission to use or copy my profile or photos, doing so would violate my privacy and would lead to legal proceedings. Thanks for reading.
Just a few ideas, don't copy and paste it :P I'm no professional profile writer, so just have a think about it.
Wow that's some help you've given him I hope he acts on it."I hope she meets him, otherwise she failed | |||
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"I hope you're happy, I just pinched my leg in my laptop trying to help xD Firstly: (VERIFIED GENUINE) We know, we can see the green tick. We know how tall you are from the stats bit on your profile. Speaking for myself, I don't care how much you weigh, or what your waist size is. We can see your body type in your pictures. Its a big block of writing, so its hard to read. Try bullet points or smaller sentences. Rather than saying you are disease free, say you get tested regularly and sexual health is important to you. It's less blunt but we get the idea. Personally, "I am 100% honest and genuine..." annoys me in a profile, its unnecessary. The bit where it says "I prefer ladies to be dress size 10-14 tallish but not essential" sounds a bit strange. Do you mean its not essential for them to be tall? Or not essential for them to be a size 10-14?? Most women want to see face pictures when they start talking (I didn't look at your pics long enough to see whether you had any face pics). The bit about private pictures would personally make me feel as though you had something to hide. If you only hide face pics, I'd suggest saying something like "I have face pics on request" Hello there, thanks for taking the time to read my profile. I am a white English man with a great sense of humour. I pride myself on being well mannered, well spoken, clean shaven and smelling nice! Sexual health is important for me, so I get checked regularly. I'm looking for lovely ladies who enjoy dinner, drinks, laughs and great sex! I am able to meet in the afternoons, and evenings.
Face pics are available on request.
If you like recieving oral, massages, cuddles and kisses then you're in the right place.
Please don't hesitate to ask me any more questions, I won't bite.
[name/nickname/initial]
PLEASE NOTE- Any person or institute does NOT have my permission to use or copy my profile or photos, doing so would violate my privacy and would lead to legal proceedings. Thanks for reading.
Just a few ideas, don't copy and paste it :P I'm no professional profile writer, so just have a think about it.
Wow that's some help you've given him I hope he acts on it.
I hope she meets him, otherwise she failed "I love happy endings  | |||
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"I wouldn't include the legal disclaimer though. It's pointless. "
Set your privacy so that you don't come up on internet searches and only members see you. 
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"Not much point in asking men when I am looking for women as I would like to know what contents in a profile appeal to women
Look at the user above you, how many veri's?? He is obviously doing something right so why not ask the successful men on here, makes perfect sense."Apparently not! | |||
"Not much point in asking men when I am looking for women as I would like to know what contents in a profile appeal to women
Look at the user above you, how many veri's?? He is obviously doing something right so why not ask the successful men on here, makes perfect sense.
Apparently not! "I often find people that ask for advice rarely change their profile. Makes you wonder why they bother??!! Ho hum | |||
"Not much point in asking men when I am looking for women as I would like to know what contents in a profile appeal to women
Look at the user above you, how many veri's?? He is obviously doing something right so why not ask the successful men on here, makes perfect sense.
Apparently not!
I often find people that ask for advice rarely change their profile. Makes you wonder why they bother??!! Ho hum"He has acted upon it | |||
"Not much point in asking men when I am looking for women as I would like to know what contents in a profile appeal to women
Look at the user above you, how many veri's?? He is obviously doing something right so why not ask the successful men on here, makes perfect sense.
Apparently not!
I often find people that ask for advice rarely change their profile. Makes you wonder why they bother??!! Ho hum He has acted upon it "He hadn't when I posted that. Well done | |||
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"I hope you're happy, I just pinched my leg in my laptop trying to help xD Firstly: (VERIFIED GENUINE) We know, we can see the green tick. We know how tall you are from the stats bit on your profile. Speaking for myself, I don't care how much you weigh, or what your waist size is. We can see your body type in your pictures. Its a big block of writing, so its hard to read. Try bullet points or smaller sentences. Rather than saying you are disease free, say you get tested regularly and sexual health is important to you. It's less blunt but we get the idea. Personally, "I am 100% honest and genuine..." annoys me in a profile, its unnecessary. The bit where it says "I prefer ladies to be dress size 10-14 tallish but not essential" sounds a bit strange. Do you mean its not essential for them to be tall? Or not essential for them to be a size 10-14?? Most women want to see face pictures when they start talking (I didn't look at your pics long enough to see whether you had any face pics). The bit about private pictures would personally make me feel as though you had something to hide. If you only hide face pics, I'd suggest saying something like "I have face pics on request" Hello there, thanks for taking the time to read my profile. I am a white English man with a great sense of humour. I pride myself on being well mannered, well spoken, clean shaven and smelling nice! Sexual health is important for me, so I get checked regularly. I'm looking for lovely ladies who enjoy dinner, drinks, laughs and great sex! I am able to meet in the afternoons, and evenings.
Face pics are available on request.
If you like recieving oral, massages, cuddles and kisses then you're in the right place.
Please don't hesitate to ask me any more questions, I won't bite.
[name/nickname/initial]
PLEASE NOTE- Any person or institute does NOT have my permission to use or copy my profile or photos, doing so would violate my privacy and would lead to legal proceedings. Thanks for reading.
Just a few ideas, don't copy and paste it :P I'm no professional profile writer, so just have a think about it.
Wow that's some help you've given him I hope he acts on it."I certainly hope he doesnt, op your profile should be your profile, it should be you selling yourself, it should be about you and why your here and what you are looking for, it shouldnt be what someone else tells you it to be, it should be a reflection of you, and if its not working then its upto you to work out how to change it. | |||
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"Don't want to sound cruel Dave but the Photo on your profile of you in those Baggy blue undies doesnt do you any favours at all. As they say "You only get 1 chance to impress" and those undies just dont do it. Sorry you did ask!. "Well done on the profile rewrite....much better! Must agree with the above tho, the baggy blue boxers and the ironing board in the background don't do you any favours  | |||
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"Baggy pants and ironing board will disappear later many thanks xx " | |||
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"Although the profile looks good its now not yours though, you used to be bi curious now your not, and like has been said anyone that is looking to meet you will press on the green arrow see this thread and see that you didnt write your own profile, just playing devils advocate." I think that the profile does indicate what the op thinks will appeal to women though or he wouldn't have chosen to alter it.I think it now shows that he feels women will want to meet him due to his nice home and car and that he is looking for a relationship with one woman...or am I misunderstanding? | |||
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"My profile has never said I was bi curious I am 100% heterosexual interested in women only!!! "yes ok, good luck with that, and here lies the problem with advice threads. | |||
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Another bland and generic profile that I would pass by if I was in your area. Where is your personality and preferences?
It also sounds a bit more dating than swinging if you ask me.
Happy fabbing tho. | |||
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"You sound a nice guy but you need more public face pics and sorry but the profile pic doesn't really do it for me but good luck " Oops typed too fast. ignore the word "face" meant just public pics  | |||
