It's a perfectly good profile except for the missing full stop at the end. You could think about a little more detail about what you like to do and what sort of people you're looking for?
I've seen much worse profiles!
You might want to put your face pics behind the 'friends only' section. Some people aren't fussed about it, others are - depends a bit on job/family etc.
Well done for including pics of both of you though!
