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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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So after admin deleting it weeks ago because of a reference. We have updated it again. Any advice or criticism will be taken positively and we will act on what you say.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"So after admin deleting it weeks ago because of a reference. We have updated it again. Any advice or criticism will be taken positively and we will act on what you say.
Thanks fabbers
Xxx"
I know I'm not what you are looking for.
I read the other thread |
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By *issLissCouple
over a year ago
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I think it's a good profile
If you wanted to add a bit I personally like it when the man describes the woman and vice versa. It's nice to see some personality and a slight glimpse into the relationship. Plus they are fun to write about each other ! X |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"I think it's a good profile
If you wanted to add a bit I personally like it when the man describes the woman and vice versa. It's nice to see some personality and a slight glimpse into the relationship. Plus they are fun to write about each other ! X"
Job title and how many women have they slept with ? Wow. |
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"So after admin deleting it weeks ago because of a reference. We have updated it again. Any advice or criticism will be taken positively and we will act on what you say.
Thanks fabbers
Xxx
I know I'm not what you are looking for.
I read the other thread " |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"So after admin deleting it weeks ago because of a reference. We have updated it again. Any advice or criticism will be taken positively and we will act on what you say.
Thanks fabbers
Xxx
I know I'm not what you are looking for.
I read the other thread "
That last thread got way out of hand and people didn't understand us properly. So why would ou think your both not what we are looking for? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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That is a huge improvement compared to your previous profile. Although to make yourself more appealing, write what you could do for people and include a torso shot of the male. Good luck.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"What do you mean by what we could do for people. As in like a unique selling point. Why we would stand out kinda thing?"
How you could give the other person a good time, what you like to do with other people.
Often single girls look for things like that in profiles |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's very well written from a grammar/spelling point of view. Which shows you've made effort and taken time And a massive improvement on the previous one.
Personally I don't think it shows much personality and is a bit one dimensional being almost totally focused on sexual preference. Though that is a personal choice.
I'd take the bit out about wanting to meet a female to take you to a club. It's unlikely to happen and comes across as needy in my opinion. If you are nervous about attending a club go when there's a social on or just put a meet up before hand and arrange to meet people there that are already going |
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