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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hello, I know another boring profile feedback request :P
Just been doing a bit of tweaking here and there, just wondering if we're giving off the right vibes with our profile.
Let us know what you think and thank you in advance for your constructive feedback. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's really well written and shows that you've put thought and time in to it. The first half in particular says a lot about what you are looking for and the restrictions you face. Not so keen on the 2 paragraphs towards the end that are a bit of a sexual wishlist/CV.
From your pictures I see long hair, ink and guitars all of which appeal to us but it's a shame that your profile doesn't touch on your personalities and that it's only the pictures that give any insight in to you as people. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Reads ok, pretty clear about what your looking for etc....I would maybe say your first two paragraphs are negatives though....saying what you can't do....its good info to have in there but maybe not right up top....maybe jiggle a few paragraphs about a bit...otherwise its good and clear to me  , |
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