Comments on a profile update please?

By *unPete OP Man over a year ago

Near Bristol

My profile used to read like 'War and Peace' I've recently reduced the word count and would value any advice.

This is a little bit 'look at me' but I would appreciate any comments to improve it and increase my meets.

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

You don't need 3 cock pics, one will do