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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Its too long, all completely irrelevant and tells a potential.meet no useful info.
there are also lots of grammar and spelling issues.
as for thinking you have 'a boss sense of humour'. IM sorry to say, you dont.
harsh comment i know. But you asked... X |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Another harsh reply
I yawned half way through it ... It's complete garbage
Cut the crap and just write it in simple terms ...
Your who ....Want what .... What you can offer ....
Keep it short and sweet  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Well how about a happy medium
More serious with a few lol in there
Just be patient and interact in the forums or chat room too
Communication is the second step once you sort your profile out |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I tried the serious profile but was getting nowhere. Trying the joky profile still getting nowhere. Single male getting nowhere.  "
After seven whole days on the site?  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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We think its awesome, brilliant! and would love to meet you
Actually, im taking the piss. We would rather stab each other with rusty forks...
we would never consider meeting you based on the profile, shame really you might be a nice guy. |
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By *adybee77Woman
over a year ago
MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire) |
erm, wow... and not in a good way...
Makes for a better knobbing experience. Really? Are we back to the school playground.
Delete and start again would be my advice. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It doesn't make much difference what you write, you will never please everyone, some will smile at the attempted humour and most already think they are better than everyone else and will shoot you down! Use the best pics you possibly can and workout your target audience. I've seen a lot worse, oh wouldn't hurt to run a spell check over it. |
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Time for a rewrite I guess. 
