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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi all!
We've had our profile text for a while now... We are thinking about a rewrite. Is the text ok now? Is the length (hehe) ok? Shorter, longer just right? Would really appreciate some tips. Found it hard to write the last time. 
Have a great weekend all.
Jx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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We re wrote ours in the week.
I think a little character reference on each other,, what you like to do, not too many " Donts" can put people off 
A little bit of humour can go a long way too.
Nette |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi all!
We've had our profile text for a while now... We are thinking about a rewrite. Is the text ok now? Is the length (hehe) ok? Shorter, longer just right? Would really appreciate some tips. Found it hard to write the last time.
Have a great weekend all.
Jx "
Looks good to us 
xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really .... "
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really ....
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry. "
You asked for feedback
Clearly you don't actually want any then  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really ....
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry.
You asked for feedback
Clearly you don't actually want any then "
What gave you that idea?
Oh, sorry....Thankyou for your feedback, we really appreciate it xx
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really ....
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry.
You asked for feedback
Clearly you don't actually want any then
What gave you that idea?
Oh, sorry....Thankyou for your feedback, we really appreciate it xx
"
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really ....
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry.
You asked for feedback
Clearly you don't actually want any then
What gave you that idea?
Oh, sorry....Thankyou for your feedback, we really appreciate it xx
"
Won't bother next time. U really do seem as stuck up as your profile
Good to know |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really ....
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry.
You asked for feedback
Clearly you don't actually want any then
What gave you that idea?
Oh, sorry....Thankyou for your feedback, we really appreciate it xx
Won't bother next time. U really do seem as stuck up as your profile
Good to know "
We rest our case
Thanks for your feedback xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really ....
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry.
You asked for feedback
Clearly you don't actually want any then
What gave you that idea?
Oh, sorry....Thankyou for your feedback, we really appreciate it xx
Won't bother next time. U really do seem as stuck up as your profile
Good to know
We rest our case
Thanks for your feedback xx "
I am single fem
I read your profile
It is very off putting
So I said so
and now are you saying I am a jumped up female lol because you don't like the feedback given ?
Hilarious
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really ....
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry.
You asked for feedback
Clearly you don't actually want any then
What gave you that idea?
Oh, sorry....Thankyou for your feedback, we really appreciate it xx
Won't bother next time. U really do seem as stuck up as your profile
Good to know
We rest our case
Thanks for your feedback xx
I am single fem
I read your profile
It is very off putting
So I said so
and now are you saying I am a jumped up female lol because you don't like the feedback given ?
Hilarious
"
Did we? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really ....
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry.
You asked for feedback
Clearly you don't actually want any then
What gave you that idea?
Oh, sorry....Thankyou for your feedback, we really appreciate it xx
Won't bother next time. U really do seem as stuck up as your profile
Good to know
We rest our case
Thanks for your feedback xx
I am single fem
I read your profile
It is very off putting
So I said so
and now are you saying I am a jumped up female lol because you don't like the feedback given ?
Hilarious
Did we? "
If u don't want an opinion which wAs supposed to be constructive , then don't ask for one |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just re-wrote ours, would appreciate your feedback too
xx
You put me off immediately single fems on a power trip ....
Really ....
Yes, we know it's not all single fems, but they do exist unfortunately.
Were sorry if you took it personally but we are fully entitled to state on our profile how we feel, and if it puts you off then so be it. Sorry.
You asked for feedback
Clearly you don't actually want any then
What gave you that idea?
Oh, sorry....Thankyou for your feedback, we really appreciate it xx
Won't bother next time. U really do seem as stuck up as your profile
Good to know
We rest our case
Thanks for your feedback xx
I am single fem
I read your profile
It is very off putting
So I said so
and now are you saying I am a jumped up female lol because you don't like the feedback given ?
Hilarious
Did we?
If u don't want an opinion which wAs supposed to be constructive , then don't ask for one "
Ok  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles "
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
"
We truly didn't take offence, are kind of confused at your outburst to be honest  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
We truly didn't take offence, are kind of confused at your outburst to be honest "
I guess someone as got out on the wrong side of the bed this morning |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
We truly didn't take offence, are kind of confused at your outburst to be honest "
Read back at your responses and you may understand
And don't ask for an opinion on a public forum if u are not prepared to get negative feedback
Which was not even negative purely advice for the point of view of a single fem who meets a lot of couples |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
We truly didn't take offence, are kind of confused at your outburst to be honest
I guess someone as got out on the wrong side of the bed this morning "
We all have our bad mornings, I know I have my fair share (Mrs Shy) lol
In fairness she is entitled to her opinion |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
We truly didn't take offence, are kind of confused at your outburst to be honest
Read back at your responses and you may understand
And don't ask for an opinion on a public forum if u are not prepared to get negative feedback
Which was not even negative purely advice for the point of view of a single fem who meets a lot of couples"
We have read back and still none the wiser. The only thing we can say to bring closure to this that we apologize if somewhere along this thread we offended you, it honestly was not our intentions  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
We truly didn't take offence, are kind of confused at your outburst to be honest
Read back at your responses and you may understand
And don't ask for an opinion on a public forum if u are not prepared to get negative feedback
Which was not even negative purely advice for the point of view of a single fem who meets a lot of couples
We have read back and still none the wiser. The only thing we can say to bring closure to this that we apologize if somewhere along this thread we offended you, it honestly was not our intentions "
I accept your appology
It profile did not offend me I just thought more single fems would meet you with out the aggressive text
Was trying to help
Lesson learned
Don't bother angel |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
We truly didn't take offence, are kind of confused at your outburst to be honest
Read back at your responses and you may understand
And don't ask for an opinion on a public forum if u are not prepared to get negative feedback
Which was not even negative purely advice for the point of view of a single fem who meets a lot of couples
We have read back and still none the wiser. The only thing we can say to bring closure to this that we apologize if somewhere along this thread we offended you, it honestly was not our intentions
I accept your appology
It profile did not offend me I just thought more single fems would meet you with out the aggressive text
Was trying to help
Lesson learned
Don't bother angel "
It may suprise you but your feedback was taken on board as we have deleted the part you advised about. Thankyou |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
We truly didn't take offence, are kind of confused at your outburst to be honest
Read back at your responses and you may understand
And don't ask for an opinion on a public forum if u are not prepared to get negative feedback
Which was not even negative purely advice for the point of view of a single fem who meets a lot of couples
We have read back and still none the wiser. The only thing we can say to bring closure to this that we apologize if somewhere along this thread we offended you, it honestly was not our intentions
I accept your appology
It profile did not offend me I just thought more single fems would meet you with out the aggressive text
Was trying to help
Lesson learned
Don't bother angel
It may suprise you but your feedback was taken on board as we have deleted the part you advised about. Thankyou "
It does surprise me lol
I am a proper nice gal but I do stick up for myself to the death lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just report the profile to admin if you find it offensive. Admin are good at deleting profiles
I don't find it offensive
I said its off putting for a single female , we have to be careful who we meet and so with that sentance it could put single girls off
That's what I said
They took offence not me
We truly didn't take offence, are kind of confused at your outburst to be honest
Read back at your responses and you may understand
And don't ask for an opinion on a public forum if u are not prepared to get negative feedback
Which was not even negative purely advice for the point of view of a single fem who meets a lot of couples
We have read back and still none the wiser. The only thing we can say to bring closure to this that we apologize if somewhere along this thread we offended you, it honestly was not our intentions
I accept your appology
It profile did not offend me I just thought more single fems would meet you with out the aggressive text
Was trying to help
Lesson learned
Don't bother angel
It may suprise you but your feedback was taken on board as we have deleted the part you advised about. Thankyou
It does surprise me lol
I am a proper nice gal but I do stick up for myself to the death lol"
We noticed! xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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profiles are like tv adverts, if you havent got my attention in the first few lines, i cant be arsed to trawl through loads of boring shite, harsh but fair.
although helps if the piccies are awesome lol |
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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago
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"profiles are like tv adverts, if you havent got my attention in the first few lines, i cant be arsed to trawl through loads of boring shite, harsh but fair.
although helps if the piccies are awesome lol"
You probably wont like mine then!   |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"profiles are like tv adverts, if you havent got my attention in the first few lines, i cant be arsed to trawl through loads of boring shite, harsh but fair.
although helps if the piccies are awesome lol
You probably wont like mine then! "
like shagging a horse, too long lol, just be happy to get to the end and enjoy the view lol |
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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago
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"profiles are like tv adverts, if you havent got my attention in the first few lines, i cant be arsed to trawl through loads of boring shite, harsh but fair.
although helps if the piccies are awesome lol
You probably wont like mine then!
like shagging a horse, too long lol, just be happy to get to the end and enjoy the view lol"
But it's quite funny do you not think? I have to try and dissuade the numpties some how!  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks for the feedback. Will try and make it a bit shorter and a bit more light hearted.
Will remove the snip bit never thought about the bareback element of it!
Any other comments?
Thank you all so far.
X |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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please, no one change their profile on my say so, it represents you not me.
humour is massive to me (not goodlooking, wealthy or hung so its all i offer) so i look for it in others, much like some search for looks, girth or wealth.
someone for eveyone and all that |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"please, no one change their profile on my say so, it represents you not me.
humour is massive to me (not goodlooking, wealthy or hung so its all i offer) so i look for it in others, much like some search for looks, girth or wealth.
someone for eveyone and all that "
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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago
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"please, no one change their profile on my say so, it represents you not me.
humour is massive to me (not goodlooking, wealthy or hung so its all i offer) so i look for it in others, much like some search for looks, girth or wealth.
someone for eveyone and all that "
Ha Ha Mine hasn't been changed in the slightest! |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"please, no one change their profile on my say so, it represents you not me.
humour is massive to me (not goodlooking, wealthy or hung so its all i offer) so i look for it in others, much like some search for looks, girth or wealth.
someone for eveyone and all that
Ha Ha Mine hasn't been changed in the slightest! "
profile
or
underpants?
lol |
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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago
Scotland - Aberdeen |
"please, no one change their profile on my say so, it represents you not me.
humour is massive to me (not goodlooking, wealthy or hung so its all i offer) so i look for it in others, much like some search for looks, girth or wealth.
someone for eveyone and all that
Ha Ha Mine hasn't been changed in the slightest!
profile
or
underpants?
lol"
Oi! My profile....though I have plenty of pants to choose from |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"please, no one change their profile on my say so, it represents you not me.
humour is massive to me (not goodlooking, wealthy or hung so its all i offer) so i look for it in others, much like some search for looks, girth or wealth.
someone for eveyone and all that
Ha Ha Mine hasn't been changed in the slightest!
profile
or
underpants?
lol
Oi! My profile....though I have plenty of pants to choose from "
lmao
one day we will help you pick some out lol |
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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago
Scotland - Aberdeen |
"please, no one change their profile on my say so, it represents you not me.
humour is massive to me (not goodlooking, wealthy or hung so its all i offer) so i look for it in others, much like some search for looks, girth or wealth.
someone for eveyone and all that
Ha Ha Mine hasn't been changed in the slightest!
profile
or
underpants?
lol
Oi! My profile....though I have plenty of pants to choose from
lmao
one day we will help you pick some out lol"
Well I do need someone to sort through all my lingerie! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"please, no one change their profile on my say so, it represents you not me.
humour is massive to me (not goodlooking, wealthy or hung so its all i offer) so i look for it in others, much like some search for looks, girth or wealth.
someone for eveyone and all that
Ha Ha Mine hasn't been changed in the slightest!
profile
or
underpants?
lol
Oi! My profile....though I have plenty of pants to choose from
lmao
one day we will help you pick some out lol
Well I do need someone to sort through all my lingerie! "
application is in the post |
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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago
Scotland - Aberdeen |
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Ha Ha Mine hasn't been changed in the slightest!
profile
or
underpants?
lol
Oi! My profile....though I have plenty of pants to choose from
lmao
one day we will help you pick some out lol
Well I do need someone to sort through all my lingerie!
application is in the post "
Depends on if your good at matching stocking tops! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Ha Ha Mine hasn't been changed in the slightest!
profile
or
underpants?
lol
Oi! My profile....though I have plenty of pants to choose from
lmao
one day we will help you pick some out lol
Well I do need someone to sort through all my lingerie!
application is in the post
Depends on if your good at matching stocking tops! "
as long as, to help the process, you put each pair on so i can check the design at the top of your thigh, under VERY close scrutiny lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Hi all!
We've had our profile text for a while now... We are thinking about a rewrite. Is the text ok now? Is the length (hehe) ok? Shorter, longer just right? Would really appreciate some tips. Found it hard to write the last time.
Have a great weekend all.
Jx "
i read it and it sounds good to me |
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