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over a year ago
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I would say the same as the previous poster.
Maybe space different parts out my paragraphs too, although as your profile is short that may only be 2 of them.
My profile isn't all from one go, I have added to it when I have thought of something new and even re-arranged the same wording so it flows better.
I know this sounds a bit overkill but if your profile isn't short and snappy you need to keep the 'flow' going so they don't just get bored and move on. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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A few grammar and punctuation issues but quite friendly profile text. It makes a difference along with spacing as people like to speed read profiles.
Nothing wrong with the photos but they are quite repetitive? Maybe cut the penis and push shots down to around 10 pics?
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