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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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i come to realise that my old profile was .....how can i put it....shit.
was just wondering if anyone would have a gander at my new one and give me there honest opinion. good and bad criticisms welcome |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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still not great.
tells nobody anything.
no one is going to message you nd ask anything, they want to be told what they are going to get, what you are into, what you can 'bring to the party' as it were |
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By *Ryan-Man
over a year ago
In Your Bush |
It is pretty dull to be honest. Maybe put some public pics up and expand on what you like and are looking for.
Everyone will have their own opinion on this. It's your profile though, not anyone else's' do whatever you are happy with. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hi,
Just my opinion
Its a little lacking any humour its almost regimented.
As a women even though im not after a guy i tend to find guys who profiles are very matter of fact gives maybe the wrong impression,add a lil bit of humour make it stand out from the crowd  |
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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago
Titz Towers, North Notts |
Ok. It is short, which is a bonus, but it is very generic. With 94,000 single guys, people won't ask for pics, they'll just move on to someone who has. Add some humour. Go for a unique angle.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Haha tar use humor I come across as a cocky shit keep ya eyes on this ill blow ya minds  "
how does humour sound cocky.
read ours.
its kind of humourous but nothing cocky in there and plenty of other manage the same.
think you are making excuses for your own lack of creativity fella |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The username suggests to me that you stay on site for a while then chuck a hissy fit, delete and reappear a few weeks later asking people to re-verify you. So I wouldn't look past that point.
The short sentences are dull and free from any personality. |
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"Hay changed it any better comments on a post card x  "
No public photos. You might like to proofread you profile. Poor punctuation doesn't matter to some people but to some it does, so why put them off?
For the want of a comma,
The meaning was lost,
For the want of punctuation,
The profile was lost,
For the want of a full stop,
The meet was lost... |
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