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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Ive just read your text and I don't know what you want, except fun and controlling but safe cuddles.
It is a little confusing to read, it's as if there is no filter between what you think and what you type.
I think you'd do better to describe what you want and what you have to offer in a more simple yet direct approach.
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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago
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Sorry but agree with the above, plus I am going to turn into the Nazi police!
Grammar goes a long way...use full stops and comma's it helps the reader, your profile block put's me off and yes, it wouldn't inspire me in the slightest  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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As above poster says it's difficult to read because of the way it is structured. I hate the pointless use of lol.
It reads as if you are cheating and comes across quite desperate. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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After reading it earlier I can see you have altered it and it's improved. Good to see you have taken on board advice and done something about it.
Good luck and welcome to Fab |
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