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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I'm afraid I can't prise my teacher hat off my head. You need some punctuation!
And maybe some more pics of you? Seems to be mostly pics of girls?"
Thank you!! was never the cleverest of lads at school.I have a lot of tattoos that's why I haven't got many pics on but do have private but never get that far x |
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You say you're very dominant but your text doesn't give that impression neither does your username so a bit of a contradictory profile for me. Personally I find a male profile which shows more of a female to be a bit insulting to the target audience and your reason for doing so doesn't wash, plenty of women love tattoos and if you think they will identify you blue them out.
In short I think you should show more of your true self in it. |
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"You say you're very dominant but your text doesn't give that impression neither does your username so a bit of a contradictory profile for me. Personally I find a male profile which shows more of a female to be a bit insulting to the target audience and your reason for doing so doesn't wash, plenty of women love tattoos and if you think they will identify you blue them out.
In short I think you should show more of your true self in it."
Does not take much to write a profile on word, do a spell and grammar check.
It is a bit hard to believe, and is very much orientated to what you want, what about what you can give to the people you meet? |
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By *adybee77Woman
over a year ago
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there's a big difference between dominant and liking it rough. You don't come across as dom at all to me.
Spell check, some punctuation... better pictures.
Your profile is your way to sell yourself - would you look at your profile and be interested? |
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Personally, I'd largely disagree with the ladies. I don't think your profile indicated that you were either dominant or not...
What I did notice though is that you seem to be targeting many audiences. Trying to please women in all areas. Ofcourse, that's good, but from experience, women don't actually care about you claiming to be Dom/sub rough/not...
They want to know more about your personality and how confident you are.
Is scrap 'oral pleaser' and the emphasis on Dom and all that. Just make it subtle. Like you enjoy those things but that's about it... A chilled out approach.
I also wouldn't bother with those pics. The topless one is ok but I'd get yourself a really good one taken.. of your body, show muscles ofcourse but don't go mad. Make it a casual, this is my body photo. Not these are my muscles photo. Don't hold yourself, etc.
As for the profile, it needs more work.
But! You seem like a nice guy! The "I've never been brill at school" line was pleasing I thought as it shows you're a descent guy and confident enough to admit that you may have problems. Everybody does though ofcourse.
Good luck! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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you say you have a lot of tattoos, yet your first pic is half of your body, so you cant have that many.
being completely honest, we wouldnt get past your username.
whether you meant it or not, it screams you arent to be trusted.
sorry |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm afraid I can't prise my teacher hat off my head. You need some punctuation!
And maybe some more pics of you? Seems to be mostly pics of girls?
Thank you!! was never the cleverest of lads at school.I have a lot of tattoos that's why I haven't got many pics on but do have private but never get that far x "
Is that upper body shot an old one then?For ssomeone with a lot of ink you are showing a lot of flesh that is untouched?
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By *B9 QueenWoman
over a year ago
Over the rainbow, under the bridge |
"If any body reads this post I'd be great full on the advice be it good or bad as I am one horny male looking for a sex buddy or couple!!!!!  "
The fact that you say you are 'bull', 'new' and are looking for someone who likes it 'rough' puts me off. |
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