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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hi Z,
As for the prose: you say you can't accommodate (without saying why, so there will be the general assumption that you're married which might well lose you brownie points) but further down you say that you can after all. Confusing.
As for the pictures - far too many, and too repetitive. At least ditch the one with your trousers around your ankles and the bend-over one, looks naff and gives the wrong signals.
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By *rfun_xxx OP Man
over a year ago
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"Hi Z,
As for the prose: you say you can't accommodate (without saying why, so there will be the general assumption that you're married which might well lose you brownie points) but further down you say that you can after all. Confusing.
As for the pictures - far too many, and too repetitive. At least ditch the one with your trousers around your ankles and the bend-over one, looks naff and gives the wrong signals.
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Thanks for your advice. Very detailed and helpful. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi Z,
As for the prose: you say you can't accommodate (without saying why, so there will be the general assumption that you're married which might well lose you brownie points) but further down you say that you can after all. Confusing.
As for the pictures - far too many, and too repetitive. At least ditch the one with your trousers around your ankles and the bend-over one, looks naff and gives the wrong signals.
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Have to agree that the pictures are bad. Dull repetitive and as for the ones with trousers round your ankles - really not an appealling look.
The profile is just like dozens of others on here - bland, one dimensional and instantly forgetable.
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By (user no longer on site)
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Oh and can't accomodate, daytime meets, no identifiable pics and your choice of user name will likley make some people, rightly or wrongly to assume that you are cheating |
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"Hi Z,
As for the prose: you say you can't accommodate (without saying why, so there will be the general assumption that you're married which might well lose you brownie points) but further down you say that you can after all. Confusing.
As for the pictures - far too many, and too repetitive. At least ditch the one with your trousers around your ankles and the bend-over one, looks naff and gives the wrong signals.
Have to agree that the pictures are bad. Dull repetitive and as for the ones with trousers round your ankles - really not an appealling look.
The profile is just like dozens of others on here - bland, one dimensional and instantly forgetable.
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Have to agree with the above, use some imagination with pictures. |
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By *rfun_xxx OP Man
over a year ago
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"Hi Z,
As for the prose: you say you can't accommodate (without saying why, so there will be the general assumption that you're married which might well lose you brownie points) but further down you say that you can after all. Confusing.
As for the pictures - far too many, and too repetitive. At least ditch the one with your trousers around your ankles and the bend-over one, looks naff and gives the wrong signals.
Have to agree that the pictures are bad. Dull repetitive and as for the ones with trousers round your ankles - really not an appealling look.
The profile is just like dozens of others on here - bland, one dimensional and instantly forgetable.
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Cheers will keep those things in mind when I make changes.
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By *rfun_xxx OP Man
over a year ago
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"Oh and can't accomodate, daytime meets, no identifiable pics and your choice of user name will likley make some people, rightly or wrongly to assume that you are cheating"
I see some very bad mistakes / oversights on my part, cheers. |
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By *rfun_xxx OP Man
over a year ago
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"Hi Z,
As for the prose: you say you can't accommodate (without saying why, so there will be the general assumption that you're married which might well lose you brownie points) but further down you say that you can after all. Confusing.
As for the pictures - far too many, and too repetitive. At least ditch the one with your trousers around your ankles and the bend-over one, looks naff and gives the wrong signals.
Have to agree that the pictures are bad. Dull repetitive and as for the ones with trousers round your ankles - really not an appealling look.
The profile is just like dozens of others on here - bland, one dimensional and instantly forgetable.
Have to agree with the above, use some imagination with pictures."
Thanks |
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By *rfun_xxx OP Man
over a year ago
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"After the advice already dispensed you can't work it out for yourself................  "
Thanks for your comment.
I'm not the best of judges and not female so it is a little difficult, I have made some changes though,would just like to improve further.
Any advice would be greatly appreciated. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The simplest way to put it is to write what you think describes you best, if you write what other people suggest, you cease to be you. You become generic and transparent. |
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By *rfun_xxx OP Man
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"The simplest way to put it is to write what you think describes you best, if you write what other people suggest, you cease to be you. You become generic and transparent."
Very good point, uniqueness is what makes us all different. Will keep this in mind when I make changes. 1 gold star for you. Cheers |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Profile doesn't really say a lot other than you want some really fun sex.
Not keen on the heavy producer line. Can't decide if you're a battery hen or an over weight film maker |
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"The simplest way to put it is to write what you think describes you best, if you write what other people suggest, you cease to be you. You become generic and transparent."
^^^^^This!
If individuals are unable to sell themselves how they expect strangers to puzzles me. I also think those that need instructions to sell themselves will need major directions in the bedroom: who wants that?!!  |
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