It makes very little sense.
It comes across as one big whinge about how you aren't getting the meets you expected. No punctuation makes it very difficult to read.
"If untreated get in touch?"
Is that supposed to be "interested"?
Sort out the text babe, the pics are great, but pics aren't always enough. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You finding it hard to get meets but you been veried by 9 members at a social and most of them said they would meet you again.....get in touch with them then lol |
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"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read
x  "
Remember that you are selling yourself in a market where there is a surfeit of single males, so lack of thought and detail will put a lot of people off.
Have a look at the example profiles and at other single male profiles (and read their feedback) and look to see how many verifications they have then spend some time building your own. 
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read
x "
just wrote it all again does it look better |
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"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read
x "
just wrote it all again does it look better |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read
x just wrote it all again does it look better "
Lots of spelling mistakes hun, but that is just a thing for me that puts me off
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By *ollie_JCouple
over a year ago
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"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read
x just wrote it all again does it look better "
No, never write profiles on a mobile.
Always check on the web version as your spacing becomes obvious. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read
x just wrote it all again does it look better
Lots of spelling mistakes hun, but that is just a thing for me that puts me off hun there wasn't lots only 2 they now changed
x "
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By (user no longer on site)
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Just a suggestion (though my spelling and punctuation is far from perfect I think I caught the typos but there were quite a few:
Hi there, I'm Dan.
I'm a nice, single, clean guy, with manners and respect.
I am not new to the swinging scene but I am still willing to learn and try new things. I am currently looking for a couple but not ruling out other offers.
If you would like to find out more about me feel free to ask.
Thanks for taking the time to read my profile and hope to hear from you all. xxxxxx |
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"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read
x just wrote it all again does it look better
Lots of spelling mistakes hun, but that is just a thing for me that puts me off hun there wasn't lots only 2 they now changed
x "
Hi there in Dan a nice single clean guy with manners and respect.i am not new to the swinging scene but I am still willing to learn and try new things .i am currently looking for a couple but not ruleling out other offers . if you would like to find out more about me fill free to ask. Thanks for taking the time to read my profile hope to hear from you all xxxxxx
"in" should be I am or I'm. "ruleling" should be ruling, "fill" should be feel and "i" should be I!!
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"With the amount of verifications you have from meeting others at socials, I doubt very much the punctuation on your profile is holding you back...."
so what could it be
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By *riendly foeWoman
over a year ago
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"With the amount of verifications you have from meeting others at socials, I doubt very much the punctuation on your profile is holding you back....
so what could it be "
Maybe the ones you have met at socials would be better answering that.... |
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"You seem to be doing fine . Spelling mistakes are no big deal tbh for us .
A couple of cock pics would be nice I have cock pics in friends only "
Well that's the point - it's a tough one for single guys on here and for us we prefer to see what's instore if we are gonna meet .
So if for example a last m8nute meet request was put up by a couple like us , you would miss out due to no pic |
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Nice pics x
