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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi there,
I'm new to the site but not to the scene. I'd appreciate it if anyone who has the time could take a look at my profile and offer some feedback. (If you're gonna mention the word flab if appreciate the feedback privately )
Cheers
Cj |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I think your editor will be busy once you submit your manuscript. Check your spelling.  "
Lol cheers will get on that. I usually get a friend to proof for me. Not sure how she'd take to me asking her to proof my fab profile though  |
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On the whole I liked it mainly because it was a bit different.
I do have to add though I have quite a short attention span and struggled in parts to remain focused 
Specifically, the intro was a bit long and I almost stopped reading before the 'less pretentious' quip - so perhaps consider shortening it?
Pics were good - and I would not have considered replying with the flab word!!
Hope it helps, Taz x |
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"I think your editor will be busy once you submit your manuscript. Check your spelling.
Lol cheers will get on that. I usually get a friend to proof for me. Not sure how she'd take to me asking her to proof my fab profile though "
And grammar check  |
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"I think your editor will be busy once you submit your manuscript. Check your spelling.
Lol cheers will get on that. I usually get a friend to proof for me. Not sure how she'd take to me asking her to proof my fab profile though "
Copy and paste it into a page in your book and tell her it's for a character and what does she think and go from there. |
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"I think your editor will be busy once you submit your manuscript. Check your spelling.
Lol cheers will get on that. I usually get a friend to proof for me. Not sure how she'd take to me asking her to proof my fab profile though
Copy and paste it into a page in your book and tell her it's for a character and what does she think and go from there. "
I like it |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"On the whole I liked it mainly because it was a bit different.
I do have to add though I have quite a short attention span and struggled in parts to remain focused
Specifically, the intro was a bit long and I almost stopped reading before the 'less pretentious' quip - so perhaps consider shortening it?
Pics were good - and I would not have considered replying with the flab word!!
Hope it helps, Taz x "
Thanks for the comments, will cut it down a bit |
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Talking of hornets nests, i was reading my copy of this months fortean times and saw an article in the strange deaths section......apparantely a swedish man was stung to death by hornets after having sex with their nest  he could have at least brought them a nectar first |
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