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just edited profile and could do with some feed back
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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hi guys and girls ive been on fab a few years now, and i thought i would have a good clean out of my profile, and i would like to see what people think so please have a look and post your thoughts.
No harm will be taken and negative feed back is fine just have a point to make. |
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Hey Pip, you need to get someone to check over your spelling. I'd lose the quotes as they don't add anything and lose the capitals like th guy above me said Obi Wankinobi or whatever he's called. Also put some stuff in about what you can offer, why would anyone choose you over someone else? A good profile takes time and energy and people think if you put in a lot or effort, you might get rewards. Lose the bit about cock pic as well. You're bi, what do you expect? Try to make a bit more of your personality come out and focus a little more on the sex side of things. Fire eating is ok but does it make ya breath stink of turps or whatever? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Reads as "arty" and pretentious. The entire profile sings the song of "me" which to most is less than attractive. As a woman, I get the feeling that a meet would be all about what I can give to the OP while I sit in awe!
I'm sure you are a nice guy, but that profile really grates on my nerves. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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ok thanks for that guys my intention was not to come out like that so ill be trying to amend the profile.
but i am an arts person so i cant really remove that from myself but i can try and tone it down at least
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Copy and paste it into word and spell check it. Men that can't spend the time to spell correctly are hardly going to spend time pleasuring my body. I would block you straight away, I was bored about 2 lines in! Sorry to be blunt |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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and to put it out there spelling is a very big issue for me i have dyslexia so spellings can be wrong for me a lot of the time and don't have word on my p.c so i have to trust the browser spell check |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Sort out the spellings and punctuation.
Personally I would be uneasy about the second paragraph. You are admitting to being on here while being in a relationship and cheating and it reads that you are having a pop at her unless you view yourself as "sexually boring"
I like the pictures, and there are a few things on your profile such as LARP and being a performer that are unusual. The stock advice is to sell yourself so I'd focus on things like that to make you stand out |
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