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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

As I see a lot of threads here about feedback of a profile, I thought it could be an idea to maybe have a thread for all, rather than individuals.

So please give feedback for the profile above. If you do give feedback, please make it constructive and suggest what you would like to see changed.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Well your instrument seems plugged in - try not to get it wet

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Well your instrument seems plugged in - try not to get it wet "

Lovely pics.

Would like to see more text about you both tho. The profile doesn't say much at all x

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Your status is asking for a slut to join you. Why not address people in a less demeaning term? Some people don't like dirty talk until the act x

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Your status is asking for a slut to join you. Why not address people in a less demeaning term? Some people don't like dirty talk until the act x"

That was aimed at a specific person, who enjoys being called that. Now removed.

Great profile you have. A very good read, although would like a couple more public pics.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Thanks x But have you thought the more public photos you have the less it leaves to the imagination?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Thanks x But have you thought the more public photos you have the less it leaves to the imagination?"

I really like your profile, it says exactly who you are and what you are looking for. The photos are varied and they 'entice' you to want to see more

If I had to be picky, I would say the only criticsm is that it does not say who you are looking for or what your interests are (but think that is explained in the profile wording)

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Is my description too long?

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By *ENDAROOSCouple  over a year ago

South West London / Surrey


"Is my description too long?"

Yes it took me all of 2 seconds to read it.

Be nice to read more about you and what you are looking for in a meet / lady.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Short and erm short

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Is my description too long?"

I would say it could be a bit longer!!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Good description

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Good description "

Ta, yours too. Good luck!!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Good description

Ta, yours too. Good luck!!"

You never really read mine did you lol . You just wanted to get below me x

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Could someone kindly look at my profile and description please.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Its honest

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Good description

Ta, yours too. Good luck!!You never really read mine did you lol . You just wanted to get below me x "

No, but not a bad idea lol!!!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Nice bum. Good info tho the fact ur 43 and can't accom strikes as dodgy as if got gf etc x

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Nice bum. Good info tho the fact ur 43 and can't accom strikes as dodgy as if got gf etc x"
Nice profile and striaght to the point xx

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

No toilet roll in the holder

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"No toilet roll in the holder "
Just used it cause i needed to get myself hard for the pic and got carried away lol xx

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"No toilet roll in the holder "
Ps . Why are you on your telly

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"No toilet roll in the holder Ps . Why are you on your telly "

Our profile pic on the site - then took another pic of that ....... see what the fakers can do with that !! lol

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"No toilet roll in the holder Ps . Why are you on your telly

Our profile pic on the site - then took another pic of that ....... see what the fakers can do with that !! lol"

Ok thanks for that . Will check the rest of your picd now lol xx

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"No toilet roll in the holder Ps . Why are you on your telly

Our profile pic on the site - then took another pic of that ....... see what the fakers can do with that !! lol"

You 2 do not like having your pics taken do you lol xx

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

photo's are the easy bit ...... can take a photo - plug camera into pc and be on your profile in 3 minutes and so we change ours regularly - so we look like it when we meet people and then they dont get a shock that we are 20yrs older

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Very detailed, funny in places, clear on what your after.

Might be too long for many on here though

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Well put profile, clear and easy to understand x

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

adlad- would be nice to see a variety of pics, maybe a few more body shots!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Squweesel: Well written, nice pics - one the whole, a good profile.

Just my one perennial bug-bear - don't like to see Friends Lists displayed. Always feel it's a bit 'needy', but that's just me.

Just gutted I'm too old as otherwise I might even fit your bill!!!

Good luck

ted.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Thanks Ted. Noted- I didn't realise you could hide it, I now have though!

Also a well written profile!

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