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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Sorry guys i know this has been asked a 1000 times and gets boring but ... I have just rewritten my profile after a weeks on site and wondered if anyone would check it out and pick the bones out of it xx ![](/icons/s/biggrin.gif) |
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"Sorry guys i know this has been asked a 1000 times and gets boring but ... I have just rewritten my profile after a weeks on site and wondered if anyone would check it out and pick the bones out of it xx "
Spell and grammar check. Also as said by op paragraphs make it easier to read. ![](/icons/s/eek.gif) |
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Its not too bad but I'd take out the first bit up to and including "a bit about myself". Purely my opinion but one picture of a lady sucking your cock is more than enough for me.
I wish you luck and a lot of fun
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