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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Sorry guys i know this has been asked a 1000 times and gets boring but ... I have just rewritten my profile after a weeks on site and wondered if anyone would check it out and pick the bones out of it xx

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By *isscheekychopsWoman  over a year ago

The land of grey peas and bacon

I'ts ok...

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Thankyou x

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I'd suggest inserting some short paragraph breaks to make it much easier on the eye....

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"I'd suggest inserting some short paragraph breaks to make it much easier on the eye.... "
thank u will take ur advice x

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By *he devil wears pradaWoman  over a year ago

gosport ish


"Sorry guys i know this has been asked a 1000 times and gets boring but ... I have just rewritten my profile after a weeks on site and wondered if anyone would check it out and pick the bones out of it xx "

Spell and grammar check. Also as said by op paragraphs make it easier to read.

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By *icecouple561Couple  over a year ago
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East Sussex

Its not too bad but I'd take out the first bit up to and including "a bit about myself". Purely my opinion but one picture of a lady sucking your cock is more than enough for me.

I wish you luck and a lot of fun

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By *icecouple561Couple  over a year ago
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East Sussex

oh and ps you might want to consider obscuring the lady's face a little more.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

............................. far..........too............many..........

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

thankyou for all your advice .. points taken x

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