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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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hi folks,been here a while+whilst ive remained a pleasant,non-pushy,nice guy,ive still struggled with meets..can i ask for advice on my profile,see if anything can be improved or worded differently?
all help appreciated,whether here or msgd privately
ps,if males wish to comment,pls keep it decent+not derogatory/nasty,thanx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Gave up reading it. It's just bullet points (which in itself is fine) but the lack of grammer and punctuaton the use of things like b4, 2 and sum made me switch off - to me it shows a lack of effort.
Other than that you could maybe smile in your pictures? |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
Staffordshire Moorlands |
Please get rid of the text speak! May sound petty but there are a lot of people who are put off by text speak in profiles - makes it look as though you can't be bothered to type full words. |
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I'd lose the verifications you have copied and pasted in your profile text. You are a verified member which you show. Seems pointless having different ones in your text, when they can easily be made up. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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the verifications are ones given to me on a previous profile,they are not fake and were genuinely given to me,just didnt get the original people to re-post onto this profile |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
Staffordshire Moorlands |
Unsure as to why you came on here asking for advice? You have been given three pieces of really constructive advice but chosen to leave your profile as it is and ignore the advice! Why ask if you dont want to know? Just curious as this happens all the time! |
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"the verifications are ones given to me on a previous profile,they are not fake and were genuinely given to me,just didnt get the original people to re-post onto this profile"
But you've been verified on this profile, so why bother with a previous profile. Doesn't matter how many times you say they are genuine, you can't prove it. Seems a pointless exercise to me.
However, as someone else said, you are obviously ignoring advise, so why bother? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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hadnt changed profile because i had only recently asked for advice and also because i didnt spend all night online..
profile now updated,but no new pictures yet |
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By *els_BellsWoman
over a year ago
with the moon n stars somewhere in gtr manc |
If you have been here before and been verified, surely you must have a bit of an idea how to write a decent profile and maybe a bit more than the 2 lines you have now?
Maybe have a look at the other advisory threads for a bit of an idea |
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