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By (user no longer on site) 5 weeks ago
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Honestly
I'm not your target audience, but I will say that the bio part of your profile needs breaking up.
There's a lot of people, myself included, that struggle with reading blocks of writing. There's 100s of threads and about 50% of them mention breaking up the bio into paragraphs
It's good to write what you want but a headache to read.
Hope you do well OP X  |
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Very hard to read due to absolutely zero punctuation. If you were going for a "stream of consciousness" experience you definitely achieved it!
Lose the pointless disclaimer which is almost as long as your bio and try to break up your text into manageable pieces.
I am bi but I am not interested in meeting couples. If I was, the things that I find good about your profile is the fact that there are some photos of the man, and photos of you together; also the fact that your bio states what you're looking for (will be much better with punctuation added).
I'd add a bit about how much experience the lady has with another woman as I am always very wary about "bi-curious" people.
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Like the volume of nice photos of you both together. It projects an image of a tight, secure and loving couple. Which for many of us is a big green flag when considering couples. And unlike my profiles its just good to see the guy well represented in the photo's.
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By *WANDTGCouple 5 weeks ago
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Just had a quick look and concur with the comments regarding block writing and no punctuation. Also lose all the emoji blocked face pics, they look rather childish and a little pointless. Maybe just put them in your friends only or keep private and show to friends when you're comfortable. |
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Hi, again I'm not your target market either, but firstly get rid of the warning at the end it's meaningless.
As others have said, your profile is difficult to read, due to the lack of punctuation and paragraphs.So maybe rethink that.
It also reads as if it's all just about the lady of the couple, lots of I am rather than we are.
Remember you're looking for the same as most couples here, a Bi fem and they have plenty of choices as the most sought after demographic on here.
They do need to be attracted to both people, it's great you have pics of you both, but what are you offering these ladies? .
When you say you want to explore your bi side, are you experienced or looking for someone to show you the ropes etc.
From all the threads about finding unicorns, it isn't easy & many couples have said they've found it easier at clubs. |
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