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By *entenTeaCouple 7 weeks ago
Buckley North Wales |
Not a bad profile but I have to agree with others that it does come accross as a agressive in the opening lines. It's fine the have communicated those points. Just possibly rearrange to soften the opening.
The use of short concise paragraphs is always nice to see and makes reading a whole lot easier. You could consider headings, numbers or bullet points.
There are a lot of negatives, but if you feel the need to communicate those points that is very understandable (especially on the Fab sausagefest). The required message content note is always useful.
The pics are excellent, but as a bi guy it would be nice to see more of Neal.
Overall, there is much to like here, just maybe soften the edges a bit.
Happy swinging
Lenten |
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It sounds like it's all about what you want op tbh, what would any potential meets get?.
Also I'd say you could do with some pics of the man, so women can decide if there's any attraction to him too,if you're both involved. |
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"We want to update our profile but don’t know what we need to change or put up I hope you guys can help us xx"
As others have said your profile is very demanding.
Ie put apple or X to prove uve read the profile,this is making people jumping through hoops.
Again the bit about if you catch my attention il pick you just sounds like your calling all the shots .
Swinging is about mutual fun and this should be equal in all cases not one person deciding.
Also hubby will be at 1st meet what's that all about !? (Not everyone is into being watched)
This sounds more like a single female demanding profile where hubby is there as a 2nd thought .
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Having both the couple's profile, and a single female profile I assume I'd be your 'target market'.
Your profile lacks any sort of friendliness or warmth. It sounds like you want a fucktoy purely for your pleasure and have no interest of would anyone else might want from the situation.
If you want to attract nice friendly people, have a nice friendly profile 
My advice would be to inject a bit of warmth and class. Clothes on photos can be as (if not more) alluring than halving it all on display.... quite literally.
Plus if you are a couple, you really should have some photos of him too.
Always remember that swinging is a two way street. People are not purely there for your use and single men have feelings too and aren't just a commodity. |
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By *end1Man 7 weeks ago
southend on sea |
When I read profiles that state do this do that send face picture stand on one leg bla bla bla.and we still may just delete. I just move on got no time for people so far up their own arse's! |
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"We have made a lot of changes to our profile now thank you for help us out and please let us know what you think now xx"
It’s worse. I thought you were a couple
Your opening line is “I’m”
You make no reference to his likes and wants other than if you meet a lesbian he may join in. |
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By *entenTeaCouple 7 weeks ago
Buckley North Wales |
"We have made a lot of changes to our profile now thank you for help us out and please let us know what you think now xx"
You have certainly softened the tone in the opening paragraphs which makes it easier to read. It feels less demanding. But I do feel like your hubby is still being sidelined. In tjst sense the profile has an asymetric feel. But ultimately it is your journey your way.
I would however suggest doing a reverse image search on your face pics. As you seem at risk of being outed as swingers to friends and family. If you are fine with that risk OK. But I feel there is degree of vulnerability here, can your pics be linked to other social media?
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"We have made a lot of changes to our profile now thank you for help us out and please let us know what you think now xx
You have certainly softened the tone in the opening paragraphs which makes it easier to read. It feels less demanding. But I do feel like your hubby is still being sidelined. In tjst sense the profile has an asymetric feel. But ultimately it is your journey your way.
I would however suggest doing a reverse image search on your face pics. As you seem at risk of being outed as swingers to friends and family. If you are fine with that risk OK. But I feel there is degree of vulnerability here, can your pics be linked to other social media?
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We have made major change now and I hope you guys can see how soft and invite our profile is |
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"We have made a lot of changes to our profile now thank you for help us out and please let us know what you think now xx
You have certainly softened the tone in the opening paragraphs which makes it easier to read. It feels less demanding. But I do feel like your hubby is still being sidelined. In tjst sense the profile has an asymetric feel. But ultimately it is your journey your way.
I would however suggest doing a reverse image search on your face pics. As you seem at risk of being outed as swingers to friends and family. If you are fine with that risk OK. But I feel there is degree of vulnerability here, can your pics be linked to other social media?
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I agree about the pics comment.
The op goes on about privacy being important yet they have very sexually explicit photos with full face visable for all to see.
Also the part on the profile about screenshots of their photos being taken sadly it has and does happen on here so if privacy really is that important then don't have such photos on the profile that could easily be used in a nasty way in the wrong hands . |
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"We have made a lot of changes to our profile now thank you for help us out and please let us know what you think now xx
You have certainly softened the tone in the opening paragraphs which makes it easier to read. It feels less demanding. But I do feel like your hubby is still being sidelined. In tjst sense the profile has an asymetric feel. But ultimately it is your journey your way.
I would however suggest doing a reverse image search on your face pics. As you seem at risk of being outed as swingers to friends and family. If you are fine with that risk OK. But I feel there is degree of vulnerability here, can your pics be linked to other social media?
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The picture can’t be and we have made everything possible to be safe and we been working hard to change our profile completely |
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By *entenTeaCouple 7 weeks ago
Buckley North Wales |
"We have made a lot of changes to our profile now thank you for help us out and please let us know what you think now xx
You have certainly softened the tone in the opening paragraphs which makes it easier to read. It feels less demanding. But I do feel like your hubby is still being sidelined. In tjst sense the profile has an asymetric feel. But ultimately it is your journey your way.
I would however suggest doing a reverse image search on your face pics. As you seem at risk of being outed as swingers to friends and family. If you are fine with that risk OK. But I feel there is degree of vulnerability here, can your pics be linked to other social media?
The picture can’t be and we have made everything possible to be safe and we been working hard to change our profile completely "
You have clearly improved your profile. But now I think you can take a step back and let things roll. There can never be a perfect profile, just as you can't have a perfect garden. So sit back enjoy the scene and revist your profile in the new year.
All the best. Xxx |
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