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By *entenTeaCouple 9 weeks ago
Buckley North Wales |
That is a good easy to read profile that gets to the point clearly and succently. It also thankfully uses concise clear paragraphs, rather thsn a solid block of text as all to often assails the eye.
A minor (and most probably pedantic) point that jumps out is how the tense changes. You mention Sam in a,first party tense "Sam my wife ect" then switch to your self in a third party tense. This felt a bit jarring.
You could possibly mention which clubs you frequent.
The photos are excellent and most appropriate. Honestly there is not much amis here.
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By *ickD80Man 9 weeks ago
Wolverhampton |
You state that Pete is 5’10” and Sam is 5’9”….so Sam’s just one inch shorter than Pete. In your pictures there’s one of you kissing each other with Sam in a red outfit and she’s about 1” shorter than Pete but then there’s a photo of Sam wearing exactly the same outfit in exactly the same room but in this photo we can see that Sam’s wearing a pair of high heels that are about 3 or 4 inches high. So if Sam’s nominal height is 1” less than Paul’s, why is she still 1” shorter than Paul when she’s wearing heels that are at least 3” tall? |
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"You state that Pete is 5’10” and Sam is 5’9”….so Sam’s just one inch shorter than Pete. In your pictures there’s one of you kissing each other with Sam in a red outfit and she’s about 1” shorter than Pete but then there’s a photo of Sam wearing exactly the same outfit in exactly the same room but in this photo we can see that Sam’s wearing a pair of high heels that are about 3 or 4 inches high. So if Sam’s nominal height is 1” less than Paul’s, why is she still 1” shorter than Paul when she’s wearing heels that are at least 3” tall?"
if you look closer you will see I'm on a step ladder
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By *ickD80Man 9 weeks ago
Wolverhampton |
"You state that Pete is 5’10” and Sam is 5’9”….so Sam’s just one inch shorter than Pete. In your pictures there’s one of you kissing each other with Sam in a red outfit and she’s about 1” shorter than Pete but then there’s a photo of Sam wearing exactly the same outfit in exactly the same room but in this photo we can see that Sam’s wearing a pair of high heels that are about 3 or 4 inches high. So if Sam’s nominal height is 1” less than Paul’s, why is she still 1” shorter than Paul when she’s wearing heels that are at least 3” tall? if you look closer you will see I'm on a step ladder "
If you were on a step ladder you’d be about a foot taller than her as that’s about how high the bottom rung of a step ladder is. If you’re still only 1” taller than her while stood on a step ladder then it means the bottom rung is only 3 or 4 inches off the floor which would make the step ladder non standard and unsafe. The rungs on any ladder need to be equally spaced including the distance from the bottom rung to the floor. |
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Maybe insert a bit of personality into it so it stands out from other couples profiles?