Profile advice

By *ante40 OP Man 10 weeks ago

darlington

Anyone got any tips or advice to sprice it up a bit

By *issfrogstompWoman 10 weeks ago

Oxford

"Anyone got any tips or advice to sprice it up a bit "

It seems to be one long sentence that doesn't make any sense?

By *ophieslutTV/TS 10 weeks ago

Central

It's a good profile. As the poster above covers, it might benefit, if you cut it into distinct sentences and paragraphs.

By (user no longer on site) 10 weeks ago

Your last sentence makes no sense?