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Profile is a year old- time for an update? Peoples thoughts ?
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By (user no longer on site) 17 weeks ago
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It's seems a little bit confused to be honest?
Most of the pics (and there are a LOT given the age of the profile) are quite "appealing to solo M eyes" to my limited mind.
But who you really want is a single bi or gay woman to pleasure Mrs while Mr looks on but doesn't pleasure the single F?
That's a very sought after demographic... Who have a LOT of profiles to read. So maybe make yours a bit more efficient (shorter, without loosing info).
And then run it through a grammar checker xx |
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Thanks- found the ofd typo so corrected those. We understand we are looking for a niche market, but I’d rather have 1 great uncompromising experience than 10 mediocre ones that I’m not 100% comfortable with. |
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Hi OP,
If I may make one suggestion, in your short section:
" We don’t full swap."
Comes over as negative and harsh. It jars with the rest of your profile. Perhaps this might be better:
“We desire FF and own partner play, so we don’t full swap.”
HTH - good luck finding your unicorn. |
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By *bi HaiveMan 17 weeks ago
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I get that there's going to be no full swap. But in an environment where the male is going to be there, even if not interacting with any woman or couple you meet, it may still be worth having a photo or two of him.
Whether he's involved or not, if he's 'in the room' then I suspect any potential play partners would want to know what he looks like too.
Just a thought. |
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"So maybe make yours a bit more efficient (shorter, without loosing info).
And then run it through a grammar checker xx"
Sorry couldn’t help it…. maybe there should be a grammar checker on the forum too.
…..Without losing…. |
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By *HUSH-Man 17 weeks ago
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Your profile looks good to me. It’s a tad long-ish but then that can act as a useful filter. It’s only a few paragraphs of writing after all.
I agree that some more pictures of (H) would be good too. |
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By (user no longer on site) 17 weeks ago
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"So maybe make yours a bit more efficient (shorter, without loosing info).
And then run it through a grammar checker xx
Sorry couldn’t help it…. maybe there should be a grammar checker on the forum too.
…..Without losing…."
Don't mind in the least! My casual chat on here is littered with errors and swipe typing accidents. I mostly forumise while walking or on transport with phone in one hand and coffee in the other. You can message me with any profile typos tho!  |
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"Your profile looks good to me. It’s a tad long-ish but then that can act as a useful filter. It’s only a few paragraphs of writing after all.
I agree that some more pictures of (H) would be good too."
Thank you. I'll work on him. Perhaps remind him he can't give himself a blow job.... Swap that for a few pics  |
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