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By *hite pineapple OP   Couple 14 weeks ago

leeds

Good morning all.

Can we please have some opinions about our profile, ways to improve it, things people do or don't like, anything off putting.

Thanks all.

Sarah xx

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By *r99mr99Man 14 weeks ago

Ealing


"Good morning all.

Can we please have some opinions about our profile, ways to improve it, things people do or don't like, anything off putting.

Thanks all.

Sarah xx"

Not a criticism but your revenge porn section doesn't make sense

"Intimate image abuse refers to the non-consensual sharing of intimate images and videos with the intent or persons."

The intent or persona isn't a complete sentence it feels like only part has been copied. May want to redo that bit

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By *r John WickMan 14 weeks ago

The Continental

This is purely constructive.

You have a lot of written text on there but it doesn’t really say much.

How do people decide if they’d be a good fit for you?

There’s not a lot about you, the type of people you seek, or what you bring to the party.

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By *icecouple561Couple 14 weeks ago
Forum Mod

East Sussex

We definitely know what you do and don't want. What can the people you too to meet expect from you?

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By *assageVirtuosoMan 14 weeks ago

SouthEast

As others have pointed out, all these disclaimers are useless junk.

If anyone uses your photos, you can't do shit about it.

Revenge porn,etc criminal sanctions...highly unlikely you'll ever fall in this category but even if you did, good luck trying to enforce the law.

Otherwise , it's a pretty clear and good profile. I get the impression that you work in the adult industry. If this isn't what you intend to convey, you may change it a bit.

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By *DW1983Man 13 weeks ago

Aberdeen, Leeds, Sheffield

As others have said, about half of your profile is currently the disclaimer. Credit to you for not copy and pasting the usual one at least, but it's still a waste of time. I just roll my eyes and move on every time I see it.

Those people who will copy your pics etc more than likely already know they shouldn't do that and will ignore it and do it anyway. For the rest of us it's just pointless noise.

The rest of the profile does give useful info about you.

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