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By (user no longer on site) OP 41 weeks ago
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I’ve been on here a few years on and off and with that has come some success after a lot of time wasted and ghosting.
Would love some advice on how to improve my profile?  |
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LOL jk but honestly iv had a lot more success meeting women on tinder and introducing them to the swinging world. As a single male its a difficult one unless youre eccentric and down to visit a club |
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"Write a decent profile.
All I know from reading your profile is that, like 90% of men on this site, you think you’ve got a big penis and you travel around the country for work."
Exactly what this lady has said 100% |
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By *ojo2joWoman 41 weeks ago
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"I’ve been on here a few years on and off and with that has come some success after a lot of time wasted and ghosting.
Would love some advice on how to improve my profile? "
It’s good that you want to please the ladies but I’d advise making it sound more like wanting a mutually enjoyable experience rather than you providing a service.
Maybe say what you like too. |
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"I’ve had a redraft and tried to make its sound a bit different following everyone’s advise  Hopefully this is an improvement? "
I’d remove the first paragraph about other men. I don’t want to be made to think about other men when I’m reading your profile.
I’d also remove the bit about leaving and coming back. It makes you sound flakey. Personally I don’t want to meet people who are likely to disappear because they can’t actually decide if they want to be into the swing lifestyle or not. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP 41 weeks ago
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"I’ve had a redraft and tried to make its sound a bit different following everyone’s advise Hopefully this is an improvement?
I’d remove the first paragraph about other men. I don’t want to be made to think about other men when I’m reading your profile.
I’d also remove the bit about leaving and coming back. It makes you sound flakey. Personally I don’t want to meet people who are likely to disappear because they can’t actually decide if they want to be into the swing lifestyle or not."
Thanks for the feedback I’ve made the corrections you suggested. I wasn’t sure about the first paragraph just thought it might add something different but your point makes sense on why not too have it |
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