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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hey just wondering what f we could get some constructive criticism on our profile. I already know that it doesn’t actually say what I want it to say. I read so many that really hit home for us but I can’t quite figure out how to say what I want to actually say. But any and all advice or criticism is appreciated. |
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Loose the legal disclaimer it means absolutely nothing.
Personally for me the close up genital photos would put me off from reading further (that's just me though)
Your bio has nothing about yourselves or nothing about what you are looking for, so pics aside again I wouldn't respond as I've no idea what you are wanting.
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By *dwalu2Couple
over a year ago
Bristol |
If you remove the pointless warning (and you should), you only have one sentence in your bio.
If you expand on that by telling people about yourselves, what you are looking for and what you offer to those you hope to meet, you will have a much better profile. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I like to read profile that tells me about the person, or persons.
What they're seeking, looking for, how they are . What things interst them.
Yours is very bland only a sentence it tells me nothing. Photos I prefer something kept to the imagination but that's just personal preference . |
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By *ucka39Man
over a year ago
Newcastle |
Hi op
Best idea browse other people bio see how they've done theirs can be hit or miss but gradually it'll give you a starting point and finished one only you know yourselves better than anyone. Then it'll just come naturally |
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Hi OP
I agree with others above.
Get rid of the legal disclaimer and write about what you're looking for and what you can offer.
I love to see photos of couples together, so I know they are a genuine couple, and don't like to see close up of genitalia and body parts.
That said, your photos should reflect you and you want. If you don't want to be social, the kind of photos you have may attract the right people.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thank you all for your suggestions and advice it was definitely appreciated. I have done some editing to the description but still have more information to add. I will also be updating our photos this weekend. Thanks again to the help. |
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