Hi, I've been away for a while and only recently got back on. Would anyone be able to critique, critisise, evaluate, appraise or whatever to my profile.
I feel I need a pair of fresh eyes. It would be appreciated
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over a year ago
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My honest review:
So I looked at the photos first and my first impression is that you were probably a gay man. Your pictures are sexy, but some of them are a little camp (really don’t mean this in any way homophobic)
When I read the profile text I was surprised to see you are a straight man looking for couples and women only.
So maybe a couple of the pics you could change (the first one, and the one laid down with your legs crossed need to go I think)
Your profile text is good, but I am not keen on the way you have broken it up with the ******
It would read better as one or two continuous paragraphs.
You have a couple of verifications, but these aren’t visible- if I see people have verifications that aren’t visible this can be a red flag as I like to read the veris.
Hope that helps
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"My honest review:
So I looked at the photos first and my first impression is that you were probably a gay man. Your pictures are sexy, but some of them are a little camp (really don’t mean this in any way homophobic)
When I read the profile text I was surprised to see you are a straight man looking for couples and women only.
So maybe a couple of the pics you could change (the first one, and the one laid down with your legs crossed need to go I think)
Your profile text is good, but I am not keen on the way you have broken it up with the ******
It would read better as one or two continuous paragraphs.
You have a couple of verifications, but these aren’t visible- if I see people have verifications that aren’t visible this can be a red flag as I like to read the veris.
Hope that helps
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