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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Ignore my pictures ad I need to take better ones.
Below was my old bio, take a look at my bew bio on my profile and give me your brutally honest opinion, am I missing something or take something out.
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I'm open minded looking to meet women & couples for friendships, socials & maybe more if we connect.
If we agree to meet then I will turn up.
FULL Test Clear 11/1/23
As I don't accommodate I am willing to book a hotel for a night on a last minute basis, but we would need to meet up for a social first to make sure we both have the connection.
Im not just here for the obvious, im here to explore...
I am a wild camper by nature.
Nothing more relaxing than slinging my hammock in the woods for 2 or 3 nights.
want to explore more outdoor adventures a campout rendezvous with a campfire (on my bucket list)
no means no (or a safe word can be used if you like cant say no games)
Im not into hard core sorry ladys.
I'm not a dom outright, but with the right person, energy and trust I can be.
That being said I much prefer the more passionate side of sex, the close body contact, build up of sexual energy, love giving oral.
Now on kik ramblingRaven87 easiest way of getting hold of me as im not online till late
If I say make me, that is an invitation...
(the word is Phoenix... I will ask you this beforehand) |
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I imagine the reason you posted this 10 hours ago, but nobody has offered advice, is because that advice would need to be fairly detailed - and difficult to convey!
The opening line is okay as being a little different, but then the introduction of you goes on a little too much. Maybe let people get to know you in a social meeting, rather than this profile. "I like wild camping, music to suit the mood and edgy comedy", would give others the option to ask questions to get to know you.
Your description of what you are looking for, pretty much covers everything. If you're looking for anything, is there any point saying what your looking for? However, later you do give an idea what you like to do. Shouldn't these sections be together (and probably as one section).
The point about being stood up, etc so will ensure you turn up, is lost because your profile text is disjointed. You mention camping at the start, then your 'fantasy' involving a camp fire is much further down. Also, if you cannot accommodate, maybe explain why.
I have no idea what the 'Phoenix' but is about. I imagine most others wouldn't either.
'No means no', is pointless to detail in your bio. Everyone is the same in that regard. Even those who aren't, will be unlikely to advertise it! |
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No means no.
That would make me ignore your profile. That’s not a usp. Thats a standard that everyone should adhere to and if you’ve had to spell it out it makes me think there is something wrong with you |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thankyou both for your input, it is and will always be greatly appreciated and very welcome.
Hopefully I've done some good reworking.
Bit concerned that my reason for not being able to accommodate might bring more negative judgement against me instead of positive, but time will tell.
As for the phoenix, I actually thought that made sense after saying "if I say make me" the phoenix was intended as my safe word, but its gone now. |
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"Ignore my pictures ad I need to take better ones.
Below was my old bio, take a look at my bew bio on my profile and give me your brutally honest opinion, am I missing something or take something out.
____________________________
I'm open minded looking to meet women & couples for friendships, socials & maybe more if we connect.
If we agree to meet then I will turn up.
FULL Test Clear 11/1/23
As I don't accommodate I am willing to book a hotel for a night on a last minute basis, but we would need to meet up for a social first to make sure we both have the connection.
Im not just here for the obvious, im here to explore...
I am a wild camper by nature.
Nothing more relaxing than slinging my hammock in the woods for 2 or 3 nights.
want to explore more outdoor adventures a campout rendezvous with a campfire (on my bucket list)
no means no (or a safe word can be used if you like cant say no games)
Im not into hard core sorry ladys.
I'm not a dom outright, but with the right person, energy and trust I can be.
That being said I much prefer the more passionate side of sex, the close body contact, build up of sexual energy, love giving oral.
Now on kik ramblingRaven87 easiest way of getting hold of me as im not online till late
If I say make me, that is an invitation...
(the word is Phoenix... I will ask you this beforehand) "
Anyone who feels the need to say they’re “edgy” are invariably anything but  |
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Your new profile reads better than the one posted in the thread.... it gives a good feeling of you as a person and what I think you're looking for.
I get the potential worry or judgement about not accommodating- however - it leads the reasons wide open for the reader to decide.
If you're married - say that- cos most ppl who won't meet married men have ALREADY assumed you are and discounted you. If they will meet married then it's just clarity.
If it's that you live with folks after maybe a mid life marriage break down.... just say it.... life happens and anyone to judge is an AHOLE!! Whatever the reason it's probably Better to be upfront.
K
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Your new profile reads better than the one posted in the thread.... it gives a good feeling of you as a person and what I think you're looking for.
I get the potential worry or judgement about not accommodating- however - it leads the reasons wide open for the reader to decide.
If you're married - say that- cos most ppl who won't meet married men have ALREADY assumed you are and discounted you. If they will meet married then it's just clarity.
If it's that you live with folks after maybe a mid life marriage break down.... just say it.... life happens and anyone to judge is an AHOLE!! Whatever the reason it's probably Better to be upfront.
K
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Never been married, would take an exceptional woman to change that. |
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Never been married, would take an exceptional woman to change that."
Ok.... so if the reason ISNT that you're in a relationship with someone - state that. (You could be in a relationship and not married lol) |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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Never been married, would take an exceptional woman to change that.
Ok.... so if the reason ISNT that you're in a relationship with someone - state that. (You could be in a relationship and not married lol) "
How does this sound
I am single, but due to personal reasons I've needed to live with family for the last few years, this is unlikely to change anytime soon.
If your looking for a secret rendezvous behind your partners back...please keep walking I'm not your plaything. |
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